Sunday Morning

The moon disappeared, along

with the night. The house was 

over come with a luminous light.

The birds began to sing, and in the

air lingered the smell of breakfasts

cooking.

My sleepiness never faded, but 

neither did my smile. My heart 

grew fonder of the morning, even

though there was a weather warning.

Torrential rain, the weather man muttered.

"Do you want one or two, 

would you like them buttered?" I

nodded at you, and you gave me 

a wink. You passed me my 

breakfast, and i dug in. You

kissed my forehead, and 

whispered to me, "Come back to

bed, sweetie."

Author's Note

Reviews

[s y e]

Oh man... I would marry Sunday Mornings if I could, haha. I just love them, most of the time they are so peaceful. I always have a date with my bed and computer, LOL! Been that way for years.

[Brook]

Sunday mornings are wonderful.Definitely. It's like a lazy day!

[Sam]

The best time of the week. An adorable read

[Brook]

Thank you, Sam.

[Stefanie Holmes]

I love the style of your writing Brook. You take real, everyday things and turn them into something so beautiful. I really enjoy that!

~Stefanie

[Brook]

Thank you Stefanie.

[Chris Micha]

Sounds like a hungry morning after a ravishing long night! Beautiful... :)

[Brook]

Thank you Christian.

[Chris Micha]

A pleasure!!

[Chris Micha]

Sunday Morning is one of my favs!!

[BlueDreams]

Wow its a very sweet & pleasing poem! :) Organized description of multiple emotions here :) It really put a smile on face.. :) Loved it :)

[Brook]

Thank you! Means a lot.

[Devesh]

' My heart grew fonder of the morning'

I don't know why, but I love this line! The weather here enhanced the experience for me, not that it was needed. You did a wonderful job, Brookly! :)

[Brook]

Thank you very much, Devesh. Always a pleasure to hear from you. :')

[Devesh]

You're most welcome :))

[Shaquana Adams]

I love the whole poem, but the ending was my favorite part. Who doesn't love to crawl back into bed? Lovely poem Brook! ^-^
-QuanaWana

[Brook]

Everyone loves to, of course! Especially when they've got stuff to do, and places to go. Thank you, QuanaWana.

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is really beautiful. Was a treat to read. ^-^

[Brook]

Thank you, Brittany. :)

[Simon Welsh]

Beautifully written. The song adds nothing though.

[Brook]

Thanks, i just like the song.

[Saddam]

You kissed my forehead, and whispered to me, "Come back to bed, sweetie."

I also love to crawl back to bed. Really nice and enjoyable piece .

[Brook]

Wouldn't we all? Thank you for reading.