Nonsense

Nonsense

A Story by Brook
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Doesn't hurt at all.

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Love is fulfilling, and uplifting. it makes you smile, when you are down. it like, completes you really. Everyone wants to be loved. Even just love from your family feels amazing. Love is so much more than movies, and books. I mean, yes it's not as perfect as in the movies and books. Love has flaws, as well as people. It's beautiful, but has the power to destroy you too. Love can last forever, as long as two people really are in love with one another, and are willing to fight through the bad times, to get back to the good. You can't expect love to work if you're going to walk away at the first sign of trouble. My great aunt, and my uncle met when they were 16, they married when they were 17. I see them together now, and it's beautiful. They're just still the same. They're old, but they still love one another you can see. They still fight, but that doesn't mean anything. They're not like the old couples people talk about, they're realistic. They argue more than say i love you, they ignore one another, more than they talk etc. But it's life. Just having one another, means they're happy. They don't need to say i love you every second, they've been together for over 20 years, they know already. Love is beautiful, and yes it has it's pain, but it's mostly beauty. Love doesn't hurt at all.

© 2014 Brook


Author's Note

Brook
I was talking about love with a friend, and i just completely went over board. I thought i'd share it, because i don't know. I guess i like it. So enjoy, share your opinions if you like.

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╰☆╮I agree with this. There are so many people that say they love someone, and at the first sign of trouble they run away. They change their facebook status to single, they shame whoever the person is, and that isn't how love works. You work through your problems (so long as you weren't cheated on or something, then I can't support sticking around haha). Just like you said, fights happen, people get the cold shoulder, but if you love someone you work through it all and stay together. Ah, such truth.╰☆╮

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brook

10 Years Ago

Exactly. But it seems like generations are starting to give up so easily now. I would not throw away.. read more
Brittany Zedalis

10 Years Ago

I totally agree. My husband and I have our problems just like every other couple but we always talk .. read more
This is so true! Love really is beautiful :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


This definitely comes straight from the heart. I'm sort of a skeptic in the love department,I don't believe in true love in the slightest for example (I also think it's more codependency what is shown in the movies as true love) and I know it's extremely complicated and can be felt for people unworthy of it, a very horrific circumstance, but it can also be beautiful

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brook

10 Years Ago

I think the love is movies is pretty artificial. But yes.
Thanks for reviewing.
Love isn't always simple tho

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brook

10 Years Ago

Nothing is simple.
You my dear are an optimist in your glowing, rainbow colored bubble - that's what my dad tells me! First, there is absolutely nothing wrong with being an optimist. You see the world as a beautiful and happy place. You see the good, the bad, the good outweighing the bad. This shines in your truly optimistic view of love. NEVER lose that. It is true and beautiful and you will have something worthwhile in the end. xo (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brook

10 Years Ago

Thank you Madalyn. Love is something i feel very strongly about, as you can tell! I don't think i ev.. read more
If only love would work, though.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brook

10 Years Ago

Love does work :)
Luna Zerimar

10 Years Ago

(: For you, hun. For you.
Wonderful story- very sweet :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brook

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Chloe.
Awesome story keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brook

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Melissa.
melissa

10 Years Ago

You're welcome
Love hirts and love makes us complete...enjoyed the read

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brook

10 Years Ago

Thank you Amos.
A really nice little piece you've wrote here. It reminds me of one of my favourite quotes by Stephen King, “If there is love, smallpox scars are as pretty as dimples. I'll love your face no matter what it looks like. Because it's yours.”

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brook

10 Years Ago

Thank you Petewa, love the quote.

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