Tombeur

Tombeur

A Poem by Brook
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Completely take all of it back. My experience with French men has been exactly how i described.

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It was the French man, the French man stole my heart.
He would greet me every morning, and at night say; Au Revoir.
He would whisper goodnight, and make me feel alive. Oh dear
French man, Why did you change your mind? It was the French man,
the French man stole my heart. Look out for the man shouting
"Je t'aime" To every soul, he'll leave you my dears, and
you'll be left on your own.

© 2014 Brook


Author's Note

Brook
Shorter than usual, but enjoy.

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This is really well written! I speak German to my ladies; English to my friends; French to my dogs ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brook

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Elliott.
This is a great write! You made the french appear as NOTHING to be dealt with! Hahaha! Really enjoyed. xo (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brook

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Madalyn. Haha xo
J'adore! ;-))

This was literally amazing, Brook. You're so talented and wow, what a perspective you put on the French, LOL!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brook

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Noodle. You're very kind haha!
This was very good! I can't wait for more!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brook

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Claire.
Ha ha ha, you made the french men look like vampires:) great write

Happy easter my friend

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brook

10 Years Ago

Hahaha. I have nothing against French men!
Happy Easter to you, too.
This is a great poem keep up the great work i can't wait to read more

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brook

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Melissa.
melissa

10 Years Ago

Your welcome

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Added on April 20, 2014
Last Updated on April 22, 2014
Tags: French, loss, loneliness, love, heartbreak

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Brook
Brook

Birmingham, United Kingdom



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