Tombeur

Completely take all of it back. My experience with French men has been exactly how i described.

It was the French man, the French man stole my heart.
He would greet me every morning, and at night say; Au Revoir.
He would whisper goodnight, and make me feel alive. Oh dear
French man, Why did you change your mind? It was the French man,
the French man stole my heart. Look out for the man shouting
"Je t'aime" To every soul, he'll leave you my dears, and
you'll be left on your own.

Author's Note

Shorter than usual, but enjoy.

Reviews

[Saddam]

Very interesting one. Really enjoyable, and here my heart is saying ""Je t'aime" To every soul, he'll leave you my dears,

[Brook]

Thank you.

[Ty]

While reading this I feel like a broken hearted stranger with a glass of wine outside a restaurant in Paris. It has that cool but sad feeling to it. It's cool how writing doesn't have to be crazy descriptive to make a unique impact. I really like this!

[Brook]

Thank you very much.

[Pryde Foltz]

Look out for the man shouting
"Je t'aime" To every soul, he'll leave you my dears, and
you'll be left on your own.

Good advice, indeed.

[Petewa]

A brilliant poem. I really enjoyed this one and have read it so many times. I look forward to reading more of your poems.

[Brook]

Thank you, Petewa.

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful romance poem./..:).....................

[Brook]

Thank you.

[Chris]

Some "tones" hold the mind more "captive" than others and inveigle their way into our thoughts.

[Brook]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...............

[Marcus]

Short and sweet, I enjoyed this write. Can feel the emotion in this piece, great write, Brook.

[Brook]

Thank you, Marcus.

[SonOfPlunder]

Not usually a style i would enjoy, but surprised me! The feelings were right on the surface. Nice work

[Brook]

Thank you very much.

[dakarai]

I liked this one. It sounds playful in nature yet with a somewhat serious warning about being caught off guard by an attraction

[Brook]

Yes, that's what intended. Thank you for reading!

[Chloe_Spence]

So beautiful- simple yet the emotion is well conveyed :)

[Brook]

Thank you.

[Chloe_Spence]

You are welcome :)