The Iniquitous Playground

The Iniquitous Playground

A Poem by Brook

"Stay away from them." The teachers would say.
They would say the same thing day by day.
Whilst those people were following me around, 
telling me I was a disgrace. Maybe it would 
have been less painful, if they didn't say it 
to my face.

"Just ignore them." My friends would laugh.
As they continued to play, and pretended to be
giraffes. 

"Kids can be cruel." The parents would whisper.
Did that mean every kid was in my school? 
Maybe I was there to be taunted, maybe it was
just the rules?

Nine years old, with thoughts of being better off dead.
Broken hearted from all the things those kids had
said. Will they love me when I disappear?
Surely anywhere would be better than here. 

© 2014 Brook


Author's Note

Brook
I don't know hearted can be used, but i used it.
Don't analyse this poem too much, but give it a read.

Tell me what you think :)

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Really nice poem, I think every person has felt like this at some point. Really well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brook

10 Years Ago

Thank you, and surely.

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Brook
Brook

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