Before the Curtians Rise!

Before the curtains rise were eyes do rise

the producer and his hand gesturing us to stand

the chatering of the clans soon began to disapear

with a curtsy and a bow as the Queen 

Queen of the play did arouse 

Walking down the aisle waving fan to all

her beauty lured the males and envied the fe-males

at the stage with a wave 

we sat in our temporary grave 

as the play did begin so did we-

as the Play of life begun so did ours

Reviews

[The Old Ashes]

Very interesting metaphors indeed. I had trouble following it and understanding it the first time, but after reading it the second and third times started to catch on to the metaphors. Has a nice flow, beat to it.

[Dead Angel]

oh i love your metaphors, there is a minor spelling error, when you say "The chatering of the clans soon began to disapear" its really suppose to be, "the CHATTERING of the clans soon began to DISAPPEAR". that was the only thing wrong with it. other than that it was a very creative write. :)

[Emily B]

The curtain will rise. I wonder that the Queen walks the aisles. Why not the King? I guess we shall see as the play begins.