It's my story too

I don't write often..and I especially don't post it for the world to see. But I kind of liked this one. If it's not good or you don't like it that's ok. Please tell me what I can do better.

Missing people I've never met

Always stuck inside my head

Waiting for an end i'd never meant to reach

Talking through it with the tears subsided

Teaching you that each story is two sided

And I'm pretty sure you just benched me 

Trying with you

Lying to you

Making up for the time I'm supposed to be dying with you

It's my ending too

And it looks like we've come full circle 

Breaking plans to make up for

Time wasted on things we were saying

With no intention of believing in a damn thing anyway

Saying things i didn't mean to

Making promises I can't keep

Don't you know I feel lied to?

Like you never had intended to be around long anyway

Making light of my shame 

Always being blamed

Always feels the same

Through this life we've changed do you even know my name

It's my story too

We don't run from the world we run from ourselves

Haven't you ever wondered 

How the boys of those unwanted move through memories unforgotten

Each time you said you loved him

With no intention of believing in a damn thing anyway

Reviews

[mel_central]

This is unbelievable, the only thing I would change is comma placement and breaks in your stanzas. The words are so good strung together brilliantly like you did. It really paints a picture. Good f*****g work. Hah!

[Brokendreamsofmarch]

Thank you! Maybe you'd like to sit down with me sometime and show me a better way to organize my words:-)

[mel_central]

sounds delightful!