I Love You!

 I never thought I could fall again. Swearing to

Myself we should only be friends. Hesitation

Filled me so. But after a while I let it go. I

Opened my heart and let you in. trying to

Forget about the might have been. With just one

Touch you changed my mind. But even now

I’m still behind. I follow the steps I always

Have, stumbling only a few times. I never

Thought about forever before. I didn’t think it

Was true but I guess all I needed was to

Fall in love with you. You can say

It in Spanish. You can say it in French.

But it doesn’t mean much unless I hear it

From you. Love maybe four letters

Forever only seven. But no matter how long

I want to love you forever.

Reviews

[Clarisse Nanoit]

I think you have potential to be a fantastic poet. Your poem needs a form and the rhythm and rhyme die halfway through, which is confusing. The topic is a common one, but that's ok sometimes. Send me some read requests! =)
KH