Evil inside me

Evil inside me

A Story by Breanna
"

Being trapped in your own mind can be deadly

"
I woke up gasping, my hands raced to my throat making sure I could breath. I panted catching my breath, I expected to find myself safe in my bed at home, instead I found myself in a dark, musty room. Walls covered in blood, hand-prints looking like someone was crawling on the walls towards my body. The room was covered in what looked like black spider-webs. I pulled the blinds up from the window to look at my surroundings to be met with a brick wall. I quickly walked to the door very eager to be leaving this nightmarish room. The long hallway looked the same as the room I woke up in. I started walking trying to find any way out, about a minute or two after I started walking I heard whispering. "You can't leave...I won't let you..." I looked behind me and saw a black like mist in the shape of a person. For some reason the mist didn't seem threatening but at the same time I didn't trust it, it had this malicious feel about it. So I turned and ran, I heard footsteps running behind me, the mist was coming after me! " YOU CAN'T LEAVE!" it screamed at me, the voice was dark and deep almost demonic. I saw the ending of the hallway and my heart dropped into the pit of my stomach...it was a dead-end. I turned around as the mist was slowing down, I soon saw someone stepping out of the mist...it was me! Only thing that was different was that she had red eyes and darker hair, she smiled a wicked smile, like the one serial killers get right before the finishing blow on their victims. " I told you, you can't leave...it's my turn to live while you stay here..." she smiled, turned and walked away. I had tried to run after her to stop her but the hallway was giving her more distance between us. I was taken captive by my own mind...and I never knew if I was ever gonna escape my mind prison. 

© 2013 Breanna


My Review

Would you like to review this Story?
Login | Register




Reviews

Interesting thoughts... would be a good one to grow.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Breanna

10 Years Ago

What's a Novella?
Chris

10 Years Ago

longer than a short story smaller than a novel.
Breanna

10 Years Ago

Ah, okay haha I might work on that
Wow this is so powerful. I understand this evil inside all of us. But ya know what? The door isn't locked all that well. There is escape :) loved this!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Breanna

10 Years Ago

Thanks I'm glad you liked it

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

118 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Added on June 3, 2013
Last Updated on June 3, 2013

Author

Breanna
Breanna

Pottstown, PA



About
I'm Breanna but everyone calls me Bri. I love music, and anime. I kinda write depressing stuff, dark and creepy stuff so be warned haha. I love horror games and horror movies. more..

Writing