That's The Nature

Do U See The Sun Shine
Do U Feel The Air
Do U Hear The Birds,
Singing everywhere

Can U See The Rainbow
After The Rain
Oh That's The Nature
That's The Nature

Do U Feel
The Morning Glow
Do U Feel
The Heat OF The Sun

Did U Enjoy The Rain
The Smell of The Earth
oh That's The Nature
That's The Nature

Did U Ever Walk Through Fire
Did U Ever Feel The Softness of a  Rose
Did U Ever Feel The Freedom
Did U Ever feel as Free as A Bird

Oh That's The Nature
That's The Nature

That's The Nature
That's The Nature

Reviews

[Imara]

I love this but I do have a few notes. "U" I usually understand slang in poems but not here, the topic of it doesn't seem to fit with that slang. Also I would add periods to help the flow. No punctuation means no stopping for breath. I read it out loud I ran out of breath. Even those who read in their head will pause and it will help with the flow.

Now you actual poem. Interesting topic, I am refreshed to see something new. I think your saying how everything we do relates back to nature, nature is our life and our home base. Asking us did we ever feel these emotions but all these emotions that you would convey through a nature metaphor. The repetition is great and "That's the nature," is probably going to be stuck in my head all day. Over all good job :)

[Broken.Words]

thanks for the review :) and next time i will not to forget about punctuating...~

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I just love this one, beautiful lyrics with a powerful rhythm to rejoice, great word choice also, well done to you!

[Chris]

Would make an interesting song... I wonder of the tune you had.

[Broken.Words]

Thanks for giving your precious time to read my work :)

[Sami Khalil]

I heard a song in this lovely poem...:)

[Broken.Words]

I actually wrote this as a Song. :)

[Broken.Words]

And Thanks For Reviewing on my Write :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Pax]

there is a tune in my head singing this poem...
a great way to expressed the beauty that sorrounds us everyday...
well expressed!

[Broken.Words]

thanks for the review :)

[Carnation]

Very nicely done. Simple yet brings joy to my heart.

[Broken.Words]

thanks :)

[Muse]

There's something charming about the simplicity of this poem...well done.

[Broken.Words]

thanks for the review

[Michael G.]

Interesting poem.
Keep writing.

[Broken.Words]

Thank You very much Sir..
:)

[Michael G.]

You're welcome. I also found "After Dark" a good poem, also. Keep at it.

[Broken.Words]

Thanks again for encouraging me...