After The Dark

There is Darkness everywhere,

Every Corner where People are Dying,

Where Everyone is hopeless,

Where everyone is Victim of Hate;

Fear in their faces,

 Tears in their eyes;

Still Have faith

                faith in that,

  

   There will be a Great Tomorrow

        After the Dark,

  There will be The Sun Raising

                                            After the Dark,

  There will be a Great day

                                       After the Dark;

They Don't have their Freedom,

They Don't have their Rights;

    Some are Displeased,

   Some are Frightened;

But They have to face the Situation,

Have to Stand for their Rights,

   Have to fight for The Great Tomorrow,

                                    For the Raising Sun,

 

There will be a Great Tomorrow

        After the Dark,

  There will be The Sun Raising

                                            After the Dark,

  There will be a Great day

                                       After the Dark;

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Star Wolf]

I like the way you wrote this, awesome job!
A great message too.

[Sami Khalil]

A good one...:)

[Broken.Words]

Thanks :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Chris]

The content and sense are clear. The rhythm stumbles a little and the flow has breaks.

[Pure Hope]

Outside of a few grammatical errors which of course are easy to correct, this piece has a wonderful emotion backing it. Your bold imagery holds the readers attention and imagination. Well done my friend!!