Tears of a girl

Tears of a girl

A Poem by BrokenStaR
"

its one of my favourite poem.. i wrote it a couple of months ago but posted it today.

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Sitting on her bed
She would cry for hours
No one would see her
No one would disturb her
All alone she can be herself
Her frustration flows out
Into these scintillating pearls...
In her world she doesn't need to fake a smile everytime
I wish i could help her...
It kills me to see her in that state
Look what you've made her become
She lives in a real world
Where real pain can be felt
And it hurts so much...
She just wished she could die
She prayed for her death the moment she got the news
But she can't
She can't betray everyone else...
Those who still need her...
Those to whom her tears are precious...
Those who'll never reject her...
Tears of a girl are precious... and when they flow.. its cause they can't take it anymore.. so please don't ignore 'em... like some people do... i only wish these will someday stop to roll down her cheeks...

 

© 2009 BrokenStaR


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"In her world she doesn't need to fake a smile everytime"
This line speaks much, and very deep emotions portrayed here
And you're right, a girl's tears are very precious ..
Well done
~Kavish~

Posted 15 Years Ago


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hey... well i'm just a gal... TRYIN to write what i feel on paper... its like a way to get out of my bad moods, which never seem to leave me... well, my life is not really pink... in fact its more dar.. more..

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