Kill me slowly

Kill me slowly

A Poem by BrokenJuliet
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Just a little weirdness.

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Grab a knife and shove it through my heart.
Push down nice and slow,
Let the pain build until you hit the other side.
I'm relaxed calm and enjoying every second,
The blood drips one by one.
Feels like a needle puncturing my flesh.
As I start to feel weak;
The feeling of the sinsation begins.
I smile my last smile and laugh my last laugh.
As your name is whispered in my ear...
I noticed this is it.

© 2010 BrokenJuliet


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Ok. I’m not sure why. But I really love this. The vibe it gives off, maybe? Or the tone? Anyway, great work

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Added on August 16, 2010
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BrokenJuliet
BrokenJuliet

Fitchburg, MA



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I'm a 14 year old girl named Liara and I love to write poetry. But it looks like my poetry isn't enough to get credit for so it's whatever I guess my writing was never as good as I thought it would be.. more..

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A Poem by BrokenJuliet