My one unforgotten love

My one unforgotten love

A Poem by BrokenJuliet
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I don't know how to describe it.

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                                I can feel you with me
Your touch is your signature.
                               I can feel you breathing down my neck.
I wish for death...but you wish for life.
                               Your my heart.
Watching over me isn't enough.
                              I need you here .
your my one and only love.
                            The feel for life,
The tears of death.
                            I hurt,
I cry,
                           I need,
I lie,
              I do it for you...


My unforgotten love.

© 2010 BrokenJuliet


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I can feel the pain in this poem, it's strong..It's amazing..This poem is beautiful.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow niece, wow. It made me emotional too because alot if us can relate more than you know.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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BrokenJuliet
BrokenJuliet

Fitchburg, MA



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I'm a 14 year old girl named Liara and I love to write poetry. But it looks like my poetry isn't enough to get credit for so it's whatever I guess my writing was never as good as I thought it would be.. more..

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