The way I look at you

The way I look at you

A Poem by BrokenJuliet
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Nothing.

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When I look at you I feel anticipation,
Just by the sound of your voice I see your face.
You make me fall deeper and deeper as I gaze at you,
As I sit at home and cry I feel your touch,
Holding me back away from the knife.
I pull closer to you and let out the tears.
Your my hero the one I look up to.
I love you,
You love me,
This is how it's suppose to be.
When I look at you or see your face my heart beats fater then ever.
It pounds and tries to come out of my body.
I gave you my heat and,
 you turned your back on me,
I guess our love wasn't meant to be.
                     
           I love you:'(.

© 2010 BrokenJuliet


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Aww.This poem was so sad): Yet full of emotion & passion . Keep on writing such deep poetry.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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BrokenJuliet
BrokenJuliet

Fitchburg, MA



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I'm a 14 year old girl named Liara and I love to write poetry. But it looks like my poetry isn't enough to get credit for so it's whatever I guess my writing was never as good as I thought it would be.. more..

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