CONFUSED

CONFUSED

A Poem by BrokenJuliet

The passion that shows,
Your consern it grows,
Your hate that is free,
The love that isn't meant to be,
My feelings that are fake,
You let my heart break,
That's not the real you.
It's all true.
Don't make me CONFUSED,
Why do you look so amused?
Please take that smirk off your face.
What have I done to you for you to take away my place?
This anger and agony is growing.
It started showing.
This love and all this hate it's building.
It's growing and eating away our soul.
No it's time to end this and set a new goal.
This is all I have to say left "You are making me so CONFUSED"



© 2010 BrokenJuliet


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I like the touch you added by not only capitalizing Confused, but bolding it and also putting it in a different color. Beautiful poem darling. 'That's not the real you.
It's all true.' those lines really spoke, to me at least(: Keep up the amazing work.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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BrokenJuliet
BrokenJuliet

Fitchburg, MA



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I'm a 14 year old girl named Liara and I love to write poetry. But it looks like my poetry isn't enough to get credit for so it's whatever I guess my writing was never as good as I thought it would be.. more..

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A Poem by BrokenJuliet