Rain

The sky fills up with gray clouds,
It blocks out all the light.
I feel weaker and weaker,
like the whole world is crashing down.
The emotions that are brought upp just by one drop,
the amount of people who can't tell that I was crying.
Rain is what helps me let out what I have locked in.
My heart beats to each tip-tap of every raindrop.
The sound of thunder fills the room,
and as the lighting takes over the drakness,
everything seems so peaceful.
It's just rain.

Reviews

[Patricia(:]

Wow, this is awesome. I love the rain(:
I must say the person under me is write, connecting nature with emotion was a genius idea! It help make the poem stronger, and helped pull the reader in!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a lyrical writing which connects nature with emotion softly in this lullaby of pain~ lovely writing~