The Last words

The Last words

A Poem by BrokenJuliet
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Death of the one that you cared most about and you said your last words and they didn't get to say theirs.

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The clouds roll in,
Blood drips from your skin.
And I stare at what once was there.
I can't take this pain and It seems so unfair.
Why you and not me,
Why can't life just be free.
My heart has been ripped to shreds.
This agony is hanging by threads.
This tortured soul can't take no more.
Your gone and I can see the door.
You left me there all alone,
Feeling dragged away from what was shown.
The tears fall form my face as I say "I love you".
I know that you won't say those words to me too.

© 2010 BrokenJuliet


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very very deeep large meaning

Posted 14 Years Ago



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BrokenJuliet
BrokenJuliet

Fitchburg, MA



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I'm a 14 year old girl named Liara and I love to write poetry. But it looks like my poetry isn't enough to get credit for so it's whatever I guess my writing was never as good as I thought it would be.. more..

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