A place I don't belong.

Life change do on to me

I can't seem to find where I belong;
It seems like I'm all by myself
Everyone I know has their own ways of life,
but Im stuck here by myself
I stand and cry and wish for something to change,
Forget this damn wish it will never come true,
but all that runs through my head is do on to others what they do on to me,
the voices I hear is all in my head
but soon I'll find you halfway dead.
No one has the sense to care
and all I do is sit and stare,
at what I have done,
there isn't a place for me on this world and all that I see is blood on the floor,
you watch and stare but you cant stand to see what I'm doing to myself,
now I'm stuck in a place I don't belong,
the border line to heaven and hell
trying to protect my soul from parishing,
I'm left here to rot and fall in a trance,
but you seem to pull me back in,
its over,
there is no place for m.

Reviews

[Laura]

Thats deep and powerful. We write the same theme, lonliness and love. I like this poem. It sounds like you talking about cutting or suicide. The thing about poem is people love it becuase they usually relate to it or say "Wow thats me!!" and girl I am saying too "wow thats me!!" If you ever need to talk to your Auntie I am here.

[Patricia(:]

This poem was deep. Full of serious deep emotions! The first stanza [ haha i don't know if it's called that either. ] really connected with me. This was yet another amazing poem(:

[Lovelysongs]

very deep
like it