Waves

These ocrean waves crash over me.

I feel so powerless,

My heart, breaking inside of my chest. I'm alone as the clock strikes midnight.

Nodody hears my screams. Nobody hears me calling your name. Saying "i love you"

The next waves crashes. Then the next.

Tears run down my face. I fall backwards into the wave; Let the water float me where it may. Under the water.

I can feel the pressure and i finally hear you. I try to fall deeper into your voice. You tell me I am foolish. I scream and water invades my lungs. I see darkness as I hit the bottom.

Never again to resurface. 

Reviews

[~Artemis~]

nice, dark, undertone, not what i expected at all. Your certainly have a unique style, I love reading it. i'm not sure "float' was the best word choice in "let the water float me" I'd say "carry me", though that's a little cliche. If you like it however, then keep it. This is a brilliant poem.