Solemnity in Serenity

In the midst of all the idiots in high-school it can be one person that makes everything okay inside. This is dedicated to my adorable idiot of a boyfriend

Cold rainy days

lost in a mid-spring haze

Drip drop drip drop

falling on umbrellas that never stop

Monotonous hallways

all singing the same refrain in a frantic craze

Class after class until I see your face

abruptly halting my dream induced pace

I look into your eyes but you not in mine

Even so, I feel our hearts combine

Blue lockers upon blue lockers

blonde bimbos and gum poppers

Your daring smile and mischievous eyes

always come to my surprise

For some reasons you hold me like you're afraid to loose me

and all your true colors I can finally see

Pain was all I really expected

but all of my fears have been rejected

We laugh as a pair

and what others think of us, we don't really care

Sunset falls

closing the clones malls

Rain-boots meeting puddles of water 

outside the workshop of a potter

The intricate beauty of the clay

assures me that our love will stay

Finally my eyelids demand sleep

and misery never utters a single peep

Reviews

[Bear]

Interesting poem, it seems cryptic in places like you didn't say all you wanted to or there are secrets you didn't want to share. Your timing and meter allow your poem to flow very smooth and your word choices and smartly done.