Beautiful Pain

In a painful relationship that you still want to work.

Leave me here to die

Naked in front of the maleficent eye

Ignore me as i cry

Knowing I'll never be able to fly

Forget about my love

Once as innocent as a white dove

But I will never rise above

This false reality I am a part of

This beautiful pain

I loved in vain

My wrists thoughtlessly slain

Singing the same silent refrain

About life I do contemplate

Your affections I often debate

Reset my world to a blank slate

Submit to my sad fate

In this terrible world we did create

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem took the reader on a sad ride into a doom relationship. Sometimes we know the ending at the beginning. The description create place and actions leading to sad places. A strong ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Rachel Grace]

I love how the last line stands out. Good job keeping the rhyme sounding natural :)