Alone Again

It seems to happen quite more often now,
being put in the dark,
while my old life thrives.
I miss many people who are close to me,
and I remember swearing,
never to lose them.
Although here,
in the darkness,
wondering about the life
passing me by,
I feel detached from the world,
from everything I knew.
I look at your necklace,
and I have no idea,
how I will ever part with it,
especially now.
This place is a living hell,
and I am desperate
to make something form.
Since I broke off the earth,
I feel like a different person,
as if leading a life,
meant for someone else.
I envy the person
who took my place...
always have.
One would think that here,
would be a safe-haven
of somesort
Like a place to runaway
from all your problems.
Yet,
this fairytale place
seems nice,
but too much of a good thing,
like cake,
could make you throw up.
 

Reviews

[Dana Kathryn]

WOW I felt this one strong within me...very beautiful poem!!! :)



Dana-

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is another excellent piece

[Jessica]

i really love this, your loneliness is clear by the poem and i can feel your loneliness
the only part i think doesn't flow as well as the rest is the ending, but i really really can relate and it's beautiful in a sad way

[Vanessa]

I'd say that this theme is the same as in "Shall I Begin?"

And thus, I'd have about the same to say about your message here.
The actual content of words seem to represent your emotions well.
For that, you're done well.

Unlike some of your other things(whichisn't a bad thing) this is a bit
more to the point and easily comparable to the life of a reader.

Good s**t, good s**t.
Ily.

Vanay nay

[Voison]

Your words hold a certain sadness within them, really nice poem

[vandana]

nice poem....it's true. liked reading it.

[StoryTailor]

It has a good point. With a little work (and there's not one piece of writing in the world that doesn't need something) it'd be incredible.