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A Poem by Broken.
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What we cannot see that is there...

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Broken trees
And fallen leaves
Leaking glasses
And tattered silks
With nothing more to bare


Strikes back with
More fury
Like fallen air
Without gravity
And you can't speak to hear


The warmest blanket
Covered in blood
The most innocence
Shattered the strongest pain
Is this really the only gain?


Raging walls
And fighting souls
Roses with no thorns
Rewinding time so it seems
The first breath

 


Of the next time.

© 2008 Broken.


Author's Note

Broken.
Good things can't visit for too long...

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Interesting, as though a fantasy could complete itself and then you rewind and relive the bloodless sacrifice once more. Haunted longing and ethereal sensuality with this first time revelry. I see why the girls love thee.
Neo-romantic impetus, succubus, incubus! Well written. Nice invocation.

Posted 16 Years Ago


wow you are an AMAZING poet!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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