Beyond Repair

Sleeping in a pool of blood

It's a crisp,crimson poison

Seeping from your dead viens

You lay limp,

Soul crying out for help

But it's no use

You're Beyond Repair

Reviews

[Call Me Blu]

Short, but dark. I have come to find that for most people it is easier to express anger and deppresion rather than joy. This can sometimes get a little heavy, but yours was the strangest pleasant mix of dark and light. Very well done.

[LucifersWarrior]

This one is different. I like it though.