My Saviour

My Saviour

A Poem by Hidden Nightmares

I walk with my head held down.

On my face I wear a frown.

They ask me if I’m okay.

I say “I’m fine” and walk away.

They never pushed it further.

Then one day I met HER.

 

She said “no you’re not.”

And it was her that gave me hope.

© 2011 Hidden Nightmares


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These words do indeed engender hope. Having that one, who can see beyond the mask and simply know what's wrong is a blessing. I really liked how this piece came across thoughtfully, but with great power. Awesome Ink!

Aaron

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Hidden Nightmares
Hidden Nightmares

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I'm not the strongest writer, but I still love to. I mostly write poems and I usually write about things relating to my life or things that are important to me. Please read my poems and review if you.. more..

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