"BROKEN WINGS"

 

Just like in the movies, I want to kiss in the rain.
I want the passion, the romance and none of the pain.

I want excitement, adventure, I want to travel the land.
I want to feel free, while holding your hand.

I want to stay up for hours, and talk through the night.
I want to find laughter, while being held tight.

I want to be the rainbow on your cloudest day.
I want you to need me, and want me to stay.

Would you run far away if I ask you to go?
Would you think I was crazy, and just tell me no?

I know I'm a dreamer, but what can I say?
Like a flower in spring, that's gone the next day.

I want to be wanted and thought of all day.
Just like a trapped bird, waiting to fly far away.

I don't know who I am, just who I've grown to be.
Like a broken wild horse......That's drowning at sea.

Reviews

[darkgurl]

I don't know who I am, just who I've grown to be.
Like a broken wild horse......That's drowning at sea.

I really enjoyed the closing lines, This is so emotional and so well written.
I really enjoy the way you are open with your stuff. This is amazing outpour!

[Broken Girl]

Thanks a bunch!!! See, already on the same mental page, you and I!!! LOL

[Adam E. Guerra]

"I don't know who I am, just who I've grown to be.
Like a broken wild horse......That's drowning at sea."


That had so much meaning it drove me up the wall.

I really like this peice, the reason i read it ws cause i have a song called broken wings that i wrote and recorded. but ,yeah, this poem is nice. i am goonna read more of your stuff.