Fantasy World (FW)

Fantasy World (FW)

A Poem by Brody Jack Jennings
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The tale of the entry to Fantasy World, where one must face trials and tricks to enter and exit the world of which all men seek. Like jumping in the rabbit hole, it is full of nonsense and illusion.

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Cross over The Bridge and down The Dirt Road,

'Tis such an easy task to get to the Creek of Toad.

Going through the evil and misty Obysh,

Say the riddle right and you get your wish.

The tree you solute all great and all mighty,

As long as ten seconds it shall glow really brightly.

The creatures you face are more dangerous than peril,

But you shall succeed with the help of King Herold.

There's no way to exit, the beach has been taken,

You'll have to fight off the Forbidden, forsaken!

Once you have passed them the task is near over,

Just take a left turn at the Four Brother Clover.

Now I'm almost quite certain if you go down the hill,

In the directed angle you'll see the Reddish-Sun Seal;

If the spot is hit right at the stroke of sunset,

The answer will be there so don't worry, don't fret!

You must close the door to the portal of worlds

Or the mortals will see our great lands and great lords!

Now i heed this warning from me onto you:

Be careful to enter Ol' FW!

© 2011 Brody Jack Jennings


Author's Note

Brody Jack Jennings
One poem to call for the use of our separate imaginations to be used to depict where this place may be. Only I know the true location of where this place is and where the inspiration comes from, but it does not mean your depictions are wrong as well.

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"The tale of the entry to Fantasy World, where one must face trials and tricks to enter and exit the world all men seek. Like jumping into a rabbit hole, it is full of nonsense and illusion." 
At some point we will all enter into the fantasy world as we leave our bodies behind and our souls are set free.  It is a world of duality, good and evil, order and mayhem.  It's better to sort these things out in the writings and stories we tell now than to be lost and confused when entering the Otherside.
"Be careful to enter Ol' FW!"

Posted 1 Year Ago


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TLK
"Creek of Toad" gets the rhyme going, but seems forced. Would you really call a creek "the Creek of Toad"? "Get yerself to the house of white, president, 'cuz yer a runnin' a nation now."
I'm also not sure what Obysh means. It's probably a word you invented. It reminds me of 'abyss', which is generally seen as evil, so I'm a bit confused.

An obvious and clear problem is 'solute', as it is spelled 'salute'.


Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 18, 2011
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