My Friend - the End

Another lonely night.
The quiet screams at me -
alone, alone, alone.
No relief in Sight.
Not even a dirty little secret
forgotten in the past,
invisible in my own life.
So much pain to bear,
can't even say I don't care
for just a thought brings me down
is it me? is it me? is it me?
Please don't tell me you understand,
keep your kind words to yourself
Your pity smothers me
adding to the heaviness.
You say someday, someday,
but someday never comes.
I don't need a friend,
Please, I just need the end.

Reviews

[Rim]

Interesting one , I enjoyed this piece , i felt so attached to it.

[Laejeon]

interesting, very deep, I feel the emotion within, nice piece

[Trace]

Very interesting poem.

If in May say.......
Sounds like what you need is a new beginning.

Search for that point and watch happiness find you.

Trace