The Wanderer

Investing time on thoughts of you is wasteful, pointless, useless, and yet, you wander through my mind, like you own it. Stopping briefly to smirk. Standing so bold in the corners of my mind, just waiting, knowing, that all you need, is a song, a smell, a suggestion, to be invited back, front and centre, right where you like it. Feeling safe, because you know, as much as you hurt me, I would never ask you to leave. I find solace in your arrogance. Let me get you a chair.

Reviews

[finalkraze]

Very good. i enjoyed it. I could feel it, and that's what I enjoyed the most.

[MomzillaNC]

I like the duality of this piece. It's a muted rage against the distant, using, abusing, ignoring, love you, hate you, need you, take from you man we all at some point find ourselves trapped with. But, it also seems to speak to that nature in all of us, male and female, to always be grasping the just out of reach, to always be hoping and opening ourselves to chance…

[BrockGirl]

Thank you so much for your comment

[Lauriegirl]

This is quite interesting..

[Rene Salinas]

I am baffled. It never stops to amazeme how much understanding there is from hte female side. Let me recapitualate so I make myself understood. We cheat, we lie, we go out with your best friend, we tell you we are at the gym while we are having a few drinks we our best mates. We come back home to deman sex and we feel superior becuase we are Men. Granted I just use all the steretypes I could find and if my wife is reading I am not like that am i? Nut you pull the chair and confess to find solace in his arrogance?

I am baffled.

But the writing is captivating

Thankyou

[A. Amos]

Now this was serious rant, hope whom you wrote for he understood you well.