Made in Taiwan ("I Lost" Vol.2)

Fake a*s love, made in Taiwan cheap bullshit!.......

 

"I'm so torn up now! Can't believe I lost you! Lost my best friend, my soulmate......I can't believe it's true!"

             - Anthony Hamilton, "I'm a Mess"

 

 

made in taiwan ("I Lost" Vol. 2)

by Bridgey "FourForADollar" Crewe

 

 

I BET SHE LIKES ME LIKE THIS

Too much of an Alpha Male

 to cry

But the memo came late to my eyes

And what took place

Was a great & disgusting feeling

at the same time

The taste of the sea's salt water in tiny increments on my lips

As I sit and repetitively, yet slowly beat the

top of my head with my fists

 

 

HER LOVE WAS

    MADE IN TAIWAN

 

Authenticity is a mystery and was hidden inside of

    warm kisses & laughs & intimate bubble baths

       and WORDS!!

 

OH MY GOD THE WORDS THAT I HEARD FROM HER

THAT WERE....

MADE IN TAIWAN

 

 

 

She said things like.....

"I'll never leave!" and

"You mean the world to me!"

 

You know, all that bullshit that various popstars continue to sing!

 

Does this mean that I'm stupid

for believing the things that I heard?

 

Her eyes were Made in Taiwan

 

because her eyes is

where I confirmed all those

Goddamn words I heard!

 

 

Her eyes made me feel safe, but just like something you buy that's fake, it would need to be replaced because after a short period of time, it would break

 

Her "love making"

was Made in Taiwan

She screamed like a murder victim

and called out for God to be saved

Then she would seizures

violently and methodically melt

into my sheets as her body would say

That it needed me

 

I thought her body needed me desperately Because she would breath heavily in anticipation of me gently

touching her body ever so lightly

Her Taiwanese eyes telling mine not to stop there, but now I understand it was a tease...

Because I see now it was just sex to her,

but it was love-making for me

 

 

What kind of a monster would do that to someone they claim they love?

Why tell me s**t that you don't mean?

And leave me to dwell inside of a shell

of the powerful man I use to be!!

You've reduced me to a never-was

    A grain of sand on a deserted island's beach

You were my purpose, so without you now, I'm completely worthless!!

THE ACT OF SUICIDE LAUGHS AT EVEN THE MERE SUGGESTION!!!

       I'M TOO INSIGNIFICANT

           TO EVEN KILL MYSELF!!!

 

I'm as little as this text!

               This is how small I've felt

 

A man isn't made to deal

with this kind of pain!

I don't even know where to begin to heal!!!

     I scream obscenities,

but it still hurts

I drink a bottle of Hennessy,

         but it still hurts

I battle mirrors and non-tinted,

 reflective windows

AND IT STILL F*****G..........HURTS!!!!

 

In love, now in pain...all because of her

Her love was costume jewelry, CZ wedding ring,  A swap meet  Prada shirt

And the label reads...

                                 100% bullshit                 

                                Made in Taiwan

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

No rhythm, no flow, just emotions. I'm not focused.......

Reviews

[Walkingblind]

This is you not focusing?

I love the flow of emotion I feel your anger, your confusion and your tears
streaming down this piece. You gave your all, YOUR ALL!! all you had, all you
gained, all you wished in the future to obtain you placed it infront of her and
she used to to dress her ego. This poem to me is like the sequel to 'vulnerABLE'
because the same power is there but just in a different way. Intense Bridgey I pray
you feel better.

be blessed

[Fidheallir]

Very emotional... it's excellent writing, but there are some places where you might want to clean up the meter (not that an inconsistent meter can't be a poetic technique, but in this case it slows the driving pace of the poem).

[Fidheallir]

Very emotional... it's excellent writing, but there are some places where you might want to clean up the meter (not that an inconsistent meter can't be a poetic technique, but in this case it slows the driving pace of the poem).

[BlessedLove]

AMAZING! emotional! raw! descriptive! wow! I really felt this one! seriously..thanx for sharing!
I'm really sorry you had to experience that though..

It seems we all have to go through our share of crap before we really find what we truly deserve; true love.

God bless!

~~BlessedLove~~;)

[Taylor Maye]

this was really good, i really like how you expressed that she was "made in taiwan". lol great poem. and i know exactly how you felt

[Taylor Maye]

this was really good, i really like how you expressed that she was "made in taiwan". lol great poem. and i know exactly how you felt

[Lady V]

Wow......She did a number on you but there is always that one individual that can do that to you. No reason when they leave.....No way to understand.......Just a memory.

The words of a broken heart can heal the world and sooth the soul yet one will never know if they only see was has been. Unable to see what could be. You are a wise man that I will do much more and much better.

Live, Love and Learn

Lady V

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

SCREAM IT! scream it. you hae something to say, and you just said it all. I liked this, full of emotion (as you said, and anger) i write similarly from a female point of view at men. i'm going to send you a few of those poems. wow.......you are a good writer. thanks for sharing.

kena

[Christina Braceros]

awwww bridgey..i can totally feel the emotion and I'm so sorry you feel this way.is there anything i can do? this is an awesome piece

[ANNA]

Well, I find myself speechless. Wow such emotional rollcoaster. I don;t even know where to begin! I love how you alway start out with a quote, I look forwarded in reading them. It gives me a tasted of what I'm about to read for one. The end is prefect love. I felt the dying of your heartbeat and mines slowly feeling every stab of this woman 100% bullshit but I know we have to go through this kind of hurt to really see what's special. If I didn't have all the heartbreaks I had went through. I would have never learned from my mistakes or really love someone for who they are. Although, this kind of pain is suicidal and to much for some people. I'm so glad you shared this piece. Your words are very powerful!!

Much love n respect,
Nasty Anna...lol

[Rebecca Rogers]

I think I dislike fake people about as much as you. It gets old having fake relationships. Nice write, my friend!! :]