Focus On The Touch

Hendrix, Clapton, Santana......they make love to their guitar. They play it so passionately! I play a nice acoustic guitar, and my instructor use to always say "Focus on the Touch".

 

"My body, you truly knew,

insatiable's my name when it comes to you......"

         "Insatiable" by Prince

 

focus on the touch

 

by Bridgey "LateNightDJVoice" McLovin

 

 

As I, lay you in my arms 

         & slowly start to play

Your body as my guitar,

I begin to relay

ALL OF THE MUSIC THAT I AM

That journeys from my heart

to my hands

 

In your ear, say as softly as I can.....

 

"Can you play

     a song for me?"

 

Can we make a song that only sings

                                     And never has to speak?

 

You smile........

    My thoughts wander for a while BUT

I don't think, I just let my fingers

        focus on the touch

 

 

Your skin melts inside my palms as I guide them along   the moist calms inside of your thong...... creating our song

Strumming along to your passionate "hums" as my fingers river dance your body's curves,

making you come........................

to my concert 

 

 

 

 

My fingertips on the tip of your tongue

Allowing you to taste 

 your own aquatic tides.....

  you look me forcefully in my eyes

 

As my free hand glides

& slowly plays your

    instrumental south side

You indiscreetly hide my hand

       between your thighs but I...... 

     

   WOULDN'T DARE TO JUST MERELY

      TOUCH YOU!!!

 

I confront your willing flesh resting against my chest

 with optimistic hopes of me.....

Creating stagnant & spiritual

stigmatic stanzas of Poetry

 

 

 

Playing your body with the hands

of someone like Carlos Santana

I take my time touching you

With purgatory-like persistence

Every inch of contact with you

being a thorough existence

 

I exist just to.....

focus on the touch

 

 

 

I bathe your body with massages that violently sing as you relax your strings & play an erotic song of wet dreams, and erect things, anticipatingly waiting, songs of physically, sensually, & musically communicating, every waking note & touch is very felt & ever changing

 

From strong & really firm to soft with shivered nerves, concentrating with my exploration and I'm reading your every word.....

 

That your body has to say

 

 

 

 

I'm gonna make it sing

& do things it never dreamed

You're my instrument to play

 

 

As I play a certain note, your eyebrows start to raise, and you look up at me as if you have something frightening to say

 

Your mouth opens up.....

while my fingers focus on your touch

And your body starts to scream or sing like a symphony but.....

 It's not fright on your face, 

but it's delight in that place

I meet your G-Spot at E Major

with my fingers filling space

 

 

With your body as my guitar

Our music plays through the night

I'm your isolated musician

Focusing on bringing

    our song to life 

 

Author's Note

So yeah, it speaks for itself. You wanna be my guitar?.....
I'm working on a piece with my axe, that I can compliment the poem with in order to perform it together, I hope to record and post something here.....

Reviews

[THE LOST ROSE]

Nice flow and everything. Man i am going to get you on that stage soon enough. Imagine Jordan never playing ball but only in the yard with his brothers. You can be possibly be the next great spoken word artist out there. Great write. Being a music fan and wishing I can play guitar I am very partial to this piece. When great players like Prince and Slash play it is like they are making love. So brother you pick the right instrument to learn and i hope it aids in your skills as a poet.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I use to play bass guitar myself but can relate how you play the instrument to how you touch a woman... and when you have her in tune it is the sweetest music in the world... nice write.

[J.Black]

Strum away Bridge!

"That your body has to say....
I'm gonna make it sing & do things
You're my instrument to play
As I hit a certain note, your eyebrows start to raise, and you look up at me as if you have something frightening to say
Your mouth opens up, while my fingers focus on your touch
And your body starts to sing a scream symphony but..." --- wow so vivid!

I play guitar as well my friend, acoustic! I can totally relate to what your saying in your poems.

[Nik'aule]

Up until this line... "I don't think, just let my fingers focus on the touch", I was really into it. Then after that line, you went into:
"Skin melts into my palms as I guide them along

The moist calms of you thong......creating our song

my fingertips on the tip of your tongue

tasting tides of quenching, anti-dry, exotic aquafina"...

Which didn't really incite any lust in me.

Then when you got to:
"I WOULDN'T DARE TO MERELY TOUCH YOU!!!!!

It was like a whole new poem! I could FEEL the poem again...

but when you got down here:
"That your body has to say....

I'm gonna make it sing, it's my instrument to play"

It started losing feeling again.

The concept and the title are brilliant. The poem as a whole could be better though with a couple rough spots cleared up.