Focus On The Touch

Hendrix, Clapton, Santana......they make love to their guitar. They play it so passionately! I play a nice acoustic guitar, and my instructor use to always say "Focus on the Touch".

 

"My body, you truly knew,

insatiable's my name when it comes to you......"

         "Insatiable" by Prince

 

focus on the touch

 

by Bridgey "LateNightDJVoice" McLovin

 

 

As I, lay you in my arms 

         & slowly start to play

Your body as my guitar,

I begin to relay

ALL OF THE MUSIC THAT I AM

That journeys from my heart

to my hands

 

In your ear, say as softly as I can.....

 

"Can you play

     a song for me?"

 

Can we make a song that only sings

                                     And never has to speak?

 

You smile........

    My thoughts wander for a while BUT

I don't think, I just let my fingers

        focus on the touch

 

 

Your skin melts inside my palms as I guide them along   the moist calms inside of your thong...... creating our song

Strumming along to your passionate "hums" as my fingers river dance your body's curves,

making you come........................

to my concert 

 

 

 

 

My fingertips on the tip of your tongue

Allowing you to taste 

 your own aquatic tides.....

  you look me forcefully in my eyes

 

As my free hand glides

& slowly plays your

    instrumental south side

You indiscreetly hide my hand

       between your thighs but I...... 

     

   WOULDN'T DARE TO JUST MERELY

      TOUCH YOU!!!

 

I confront your willing flesh resting against my chest

 with optimistic hopes of me.....

Creating stagnant & spiritual

stigmatic stanzas of Poetry

 

 

 

Playing your body with the hands

of someone like Carlos Santana

I take my time touching you

With purgatory-like persistence

Every inch of contact with you

being a thorough existence

 

I exist just to.....

focus on the touch

 

 

 

I bathe your body with massages that violently sing as you relax your strings & play an erotic song of wet dreams, and erect things, anticipatingly waiting, songs of physically, sensually, & musically communicating, every waking note & touch is very felt & ever changing

 

From strong & really firm to soft with shivered nerves, concentrating with my exploration and I'm reading your every word.....

 

That your body has to say

 

 

 

 

I'm gonna make it sing

& do things it never dreamed

You're my instrument to play

 

 

As I play a certain note, your eyebrows start to raise, and you look up at me as if you have something frightening to say

 

Your mouth opens up.....

while my fingers focus on your touch

And your body starts to scream or sing like a symphony but.....

 It's not fright on your face, 

but it's delight in that place

I meet your G-Spot at E Major

with my fingers filling space

 

 

With your body as my guitar

Our music plays through the night

I'm your isolated musician

Focusing on bringing

    our song to life 

 

Author's Note

So yeah, it speaks for itself. You wanna be my guitar?.....
I'm working on a piece with my axe, that I can compliment the poem with in order to perform it together, I hope to record and post something here.....

Reviews

[THE LOST ROSE]

Nice flow and everything. Man i am going to get you on that stage soon enough. Imagine Jordan never playing ball but only in the yard with his brothers. You can be possibly be the next great spoken word artist out there. Great write. Being a music fan and wishing I can play guitar I am very partial to this piece. When great players like Prince and Slash play it is like they are making love. So brother you pick the right instrument to learn and i hope it aids in your skills as a poet.

[Dani California]

Bravo! This is perfect! Creative, sensual and beautiful. My favorite of yours thus far. Love the guitar ... composing music metaphor. Nice!!

[Shellie]

Definitily sexy!! Some great writing there.....making love is like making music without words. Nice thought.

[~angelalala~]

"Your body as my guitar" i absolutely love this poem. you've combined 2 of my most favorite things in life: music and beautiful, loving sex. and you've done it well. the shape of a woman's body is very much like a guitar. a perfect metaphor. "making you come........................to my concert" you keep this poem focused on the musical aspect throughout, it never loses it's musical edge. this is beautiful & i have to say, this is probably one of my favorite of yours. going in my library. you've written it brilliantly. so sensual, so erotic, but not vulgar. & i absolutely love the metaphor here, playing the woman's body as a musical instrument. IT'S GORGEOUS!!

[Bud]

Totally relate to this one...I love playing guitar. Whether it be acoustic or electric. From the onset you mention three of my most favored guitarist...Hendrix, Clapton, & Santana. I love your perspective on music theory. Especially with the line:

My fingers meet your G-Spot at E Major
with my fingers filling space

Oh, the music one makes with those chords! Brilliant!!!!
For the record...Santana once told a woman who knocked on his door seeking 'something', " I can't do for you what my music does for you.". But it sure doesn't hurt to try!!!!!!!! Absolutely love this piece, Bridgey!

[EmpressPoetess]

Poetically superb! You have a unique way with words that's very creative and brings such joy to your readers!! I look forward to more like this! Thanks for sharing, Bridgey!

[ANNA]

If I could only play the guitar with you! lol I wonder..

So I noticed that you cleaned this poem up or edited it. I do love the way you took this piece. Not many would have made it sound like love making. Smiles! I liked how you played with the colors and though I can't pick my fav lines bec it's to perfect to pick apart. I give you 100%, You wrote down what your passionate about. Know I how what you do when your alone! lol I hope to see more of your passaionate hobbies written like this Bridgey! Thanks for sending me your masterpiece!! I always more then happy to reread or review for you my sweets

Much respect n love,
Anna

[perfectlymetiKulous]

Hey, I'd never read this one... very sexy.
:) I really loved it. Two of my favorite things together. How could I not love it?

"As I, lay you in my arms
& slowly start to play
Your body as my guitar,
I begin to relay
ALL OF THE MUSIC THAT I AM
That journeys from my heart
to my hands
In your ear, say as softly as I can.....
"Can you play
a song for me?""

it's too beautiful for words.

[bluessadmood]

Your skin melts in my palms as I guide them along the moist calm
As my free hand glides
& slowly plays your instrumental south side
You indiscreetly hide my hand
I bathe your body with massages that violently sing as you relax your strings & play an erotic song of wet dreams, and erect things, anticipatingly waiting, songs of physically, sensually, & musically communicating, every waking note & touch is felt & ever changing
I'm gonna make it sing
& do things it never dreamed
You're my instrument to play
With your body as my guitar
Our music plays throughout the night
I'm your isolated musician
focusing on bringing our song to life
just perfect,playing a symphony,so sweet,erotica in very poetic words,like tunes
like playing an instrument,in a very sweet way,how lovely you directed this scene
and orchestrated with harmony ,this lovely night serenade
lovely write ..

[poetic soul]

impressive.....saucy and exactly what a woman wants to hear and feel.....filled with love and passion, you strike the "chords" pretty well.....

gr8 write.. loved the read....

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[sheerpoetry]

every waking note and touch is felt and ever changing. Yeah thats decent! Umm I like this because a woman can tell when your just touching them and you dont realy care to play them. like how a kid just bangs on a piano and s**t.