Spend the Rest of Your Life with Me......Tonight

Why do our feelings change so quickly? This is about being caught up in momentary passion and completely embracing that passion only to have lost that love and passion soon after.

“I must be crazy standing in this place, but I'm feeling no disgrace, for asking.......

Let me hold you tight......If only for one night”

                                             -  Luther Vandross, “If Only For One Night” 

 

 

 

Spend the Rest of Your

Life With Me.......Tonight

 

By Bridgey "GoneBeforeUWakeUpInTheMorning" McLovin

 

 

 

 

 She walked with the presence of 

                                September 11th

 

With red carpet appeal

it's unreal watching her move right to left and....

His eyes bugged......minus the drugs

As she struts up his Stairway to Heaven

          Like Led Zeppelin 

 

No question, the object of his affection
Earned him an erection as he,

orientates her inner being and progression
He calls daily

She answers the phone?

           Maybe

Persistently, he waits out her clichéd

“Hard to Get” playing

Still…….

It's a delight "  learning"   her a*s,

he might let her, spend the rest of her life with him for tonight!

 

 

His well chosen words surge

smoothly through her nerves

as they flow lower and lower

her flirting gets bolder and bolder

 

He pays no attention to her flirting,

Though not a fool, he knows he can have her,

so he just plays it cool

His eyes hint of passion, but his words make her imagine

whether the nether regions of his

passive aggressive actions

would be worth taking the plunge.......

What has begun, is the mental foreplay

Taking place, minus the pun

 

As he flirts with her body using words smart and coy

He really listens as she speaks

which her intuition really enjoys

Relaxing her bosom, weak kneed and very intrigued

by his, thought-to-be need not to spread said knees  

makes her knees want to proceed to spread comfortably

so she leads him to her sheets….

ACTING reluctant, he agrees!

 

His skills, did it again

and his game is never wrong,

cause like Bonita Applebum,

              she had to put him on!

 

She was his "only one" before,

now BEFORE 

       is the past!!!

 And all his phone calls stopped,

         soon after he got the a*s

So she went and changed her hair,

but now he just don't care!
Unless that different hair's attached

 To a different derriere!!

 

 

He's attention deficient,

       Love makes him hesitant 
Leases it from day to day,

             never a long-term resident
...It's evident, yet irrelevant to pursue 
        

 Because when she says,

           "I LOVE YOU!"
He says,

  “I LOVE YOU TOOOOO...

           NIGHT!"

He might, just recite whatever romantic movie or music lines fitting, she might like

 

Just to make love

and make that same love leave later

He WAS happy to date her,

but "Father Time" can't save her!

I'm not saying it's right,

just understanding his plight

It's time for the next girl

To love him forever...

    tonight

 

 

Author's Note

Let me straighten something out about this one "right fast"..... This poem is about a subject who's momentarily in love. I could've easily have made the subject a woman. But this doesn't directly speak for me! You don't have to ask me anymore. LOL I got the title from a line from "Mo' Better Blues" but if you blinked, you missed it. I love the flow with this one. Very easy when I recite this one at open mic. I feel like Darius Lovehall when I do this one! The girls dig the flow and rhythm, and the guys(not surprisingly) enjoy the hilarity of what I can assume is life related. Everyone wins and this is one of my favorite writes. This is probably the most focused I've ever been on a piece!

Reviews

[ANNA]

Hun you are more then a spoken word poet!!! More then a wordsmith, More then a sun burn on the back my back. You are more then the box people push you in. I never see anyone to mold and beld and shaped the poem as you do. You are more then one and to much for me to breathe in. I love and forever will be your fav and support you. We have all been here. We get placed in these imagery boxes that others have no right in placing us. They don't know us. They take ours words and bring our poetry to its knee's.

You are more then this website.......

Much love n respect,
anna

I can't wait for you to read my new poet 'Just Sex' It will be up tomorrow. It something like this. I love the way your mind works. Never lose yourself in others who don't know you or your gifted!


So she went and changed her hair,

but now he just don't care!
Unless that different hair's attached

To a different derriere!!

This is sooo true! lol '"laughing at myself" lol

[Fear Corrupts!]

Haha,
this is kind of funny.
Great flow, rythmn, blah, blah, blah, etc.
Man,
you can really write about anything & have it turn out well.

[ Fear Corrups! ]

[Nik'aule]

So she went and changed her hair, but now he just don't care

Unless that different hair's attached to a different derriere

LMAO... that's real s**t right there! LOL... this was flow-tastic... the whole thing reminds of me a freestyle session with the hottest rapper in town... you know, you're all sitting there with the blunt or chessboard, whatever your weapon of choice.... and this dude drops some s**t that just kills it... everyone is high off the hilarity and sick cadence and no one wants to go after that... definetely check out the Lyrical Lounge group when you get a chance... you'd fit right in and breathe new life into it

[Kenji Light]

Talk about flow. I loved the way you set this piece up. The interspersed rhymes that follow no particular patternand yet make the piece concrete and very organized is a feat that is very difficult for me. That's why I gave up on intentional rhyming. I think that this would certainly be a good spoken word piece because the words are naural, like ordinary speech, the speaker is distinct in his/her ability to be an authentic character with a set vocabulary and a willingness to tell the narrative from a rhyming P.O.V. that has a big city beat to it that really works with the development of the narrative. I think that the appreciation of the female form is indicative of regular human nature. Especially when you call it the concept of being "momentarily in love." The idea of having a temporary connection is a very contemporary human thought in the sense of the carnal physical attraction without emphasis on the emotional side of things as much. You hit the nail on the head. Nice piece. Send more read requests. -Kenji

[THE LOST ROSE]

I read this poem yesterday and all day I kept thinking about the fire you brought with this. This was hot and it flowed so well I saw a music video because the imagery was there. I like the little suttle joke in the piece;
She says "I LOVE YOU!"
He says "I LOVE YOU TOO.........night"
I appreciate your creativity and your ability to share you with us. This is what I needed for my flow was a poet that can bring it and make you think about something the next day. Impactful great.

[jay-lyse]

the honesty behind your words is wat stands out the most ... the way you allowed the reality of what sometimes happens in relationships to play out made me wanna read more ... my favorite part was when she said, "i love you" and his reply is "i love you to... nite" that line made me smile...

[Lyrical Love]

Wow! Meeting you through this piece packs a helluvr punch!
The freshness of your voice is very much appreciated-and I am sure
others will concur.
This is such a truthful write with much whimsy making it a perfect
spoken word piece!
Kudos!

[Xeru]

Dyin laughin at this one..lmao

Alright hold up. That was a magical blend of hip hop and poetry in my eyes. Almost cinematically realistic and it held every culture together in the male perspective of achieving that feeling. The feeling of getting as much as you can out of that moment and losing it soon after acquried. Ahhhhhhh I remember that s**t... Yeah that was a good joint man. And the first piece I read of yours. If you doing it like this you just made a fan out of me. Good s**t foreal. Flow was nasty too. Catchy.. Content was relevant. You are definately a artist in the mold I see myself in. Keep up that fly ish

[Jinx]

Wow, I dig this. Very nicely done. Has a good rhythm to it.

Good job!

[Pax Analog]

A*s-tounding!

Nothin' better than the irreverent wit of a turned-on male, especially when he's able to sidestep potential romantic doldrums, and stay focused on the ongoing a*s-travaganza.

"It's time for the next girl to love him forever........tonight" -- absolutely! Why not compress forever in a night? How mystically pragmatic! ;-)

"It's a delight "learning" her a*s, he might/Let her spend the rest of his life with him......tonight" -- I dig that part about learning her a*s -- mayhaps starry-eyed a*s-tronomy ensues, or a*s-trological meanings shiver and quake. . .

Good work, mon. Tight, focused, humorous.