Osama, Obama, Oh Mama, Mo' Drama

When I recite this one, it gets progressively louder and more passionate as I'm angered. That's why I "typed" it starting small, then it enlarges, but gets smaller by the end. I hope you enjoy.....

 

                  “Yes, I know my enemies…….

There the teachers who taught me to fight me

Compromise, Conformity, Assimilation, Submission, Ignorance, Hypocrisy, Brutality, The Elite……All of which are American Dreams, All of which are American Dreams,……. ALL OF WHICH ARE AMERICAN DREAMS!!!!”

             -  Rage Against The Machine, “Know Your Enemy”  

 

 

Osama, Obama, Oh Mama
            Mo' Drama

by Bridgey "CrazyGuyOutsideTheCornerstoreScreaminAtAir" McLovin

 

 

Life's a b***h and then you marry one
And it's a scary One Life to Live
I've experienced kids having kids with jail bids double they age
A gun cocked and waived, and shoots in the face
Of another brotha that shorted him 20 bucks the other day
If there's another way to escape the ghetto, we'll never know
Those who keep their lives straight, and keep their mouths closed,
May get a job for minimum wage?

You mean to tell me that people in this place
Are either dead, or dead broke, or dealing dope
Jail bids, sharing a cage?
But then, our heads of state got billion tucked away
For bailouts and oil wars

while the poor is ignored?
We're getting played and paid low
You think we're getting saved?
JESUS CHRIST 

If he were buried, 
He would be, spinning in his grave to see us as slaves

grow up inside a maze
Killing each other for cheese like trapped rat renegades

Shooting bullets is praised

Buildings laying decayed
We're in the place where our police get paid in drug raids
Abandoned playgrounds where kids can't play
And the homeless hangs out
Backboards with no rims

and monkey bars rusted out
Where Babies are have babies
And baby daddies running away
Where young girls are called "mommy"

before they're called "teenage"
Low income homes
From trailer park trash  

to ghetto brownstones
Plantations to reservations

Debating the reality to roam

Today, poor isn't a color

but the winning color is GREEN$

You either get it or forget

Living thee American Dream

So I ask the "other half" to seek privacy
Before you laugh
And could you please, before you leave
Remove your dick from our a*s?!?!
The games they're playing
Raising gas with no explanation
Dollar menu heaven

Work payday hell 

with no vacation

High prices, with no helping hand
Just Hamburger Helper

With no bail out plan, no stress relief
So more Alka Seltzer

Citizens, go "Helter Skelter"
Mother nature, We melt her
Our Mentality, “F**k you, pay me!” 

As our morality welters

Women want their respect

with Twitter pics showing their breasts

Then are upset when boys

expect meaningless sex

No health care? They don't care

Have a seat in the chair.

You'll sit in that waiting room forever

Like you're not even there
We're like kids legally grown
The bling your wrist that's shown 
Comes with the limbs

Of little kids in Sierra Leone
There's no place like home 
High mortgage rates

You'll can't own
No glove, Mo' love

But who's the father is unknown
Our teachers get no respect
Our preachers lie and collect
Condemn Superbowl n*****s  
But sell pills to get erect?

We elect evil

& expect regal behavior

from these people

100,000 jobs lost

for every one

fired C.E.O.

Holy & Oil wars

so now we need

extended soldier tours

No cancer cures

Lawyers charm injustice

From jurors

Opportunity is

closing doors

The wealthy

still want more!

Damn,

my a*****e's sore!!

WHAT THE F**K

IS IT ALL FOR?!!?!??!

 

Breathe...

I just try to live, before it's time to leave
I just, wanna be happy

I just wanna... Be

Author's Note

I hope you enjoy this one. This is my mama's favorite one! Lol I started writing this 8 years ago and I only recently finished it. I haven't recited it yet, but I hope to soon. I hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[J.Black]

A mama's favourite and a J. Black's favourite too!

Such an "in-your-f*****g-face" kinda poem where it stars out small, but you don't feel like the people hear ya, so then you get louder and louder until people see nothing but the red and anger you possess.

"Life's a b***h and then you marry one." -- you started out with a bangin' line, that I was captivated from the start.

It was so powerful and full of emotions, but to actually hear YOU read this would be mind blowing. I really think you should record yourself and then put it on a playlist just so people can really get that feel. Overall, this is the first piece I've reviewed from ya, and I like you. You got raw talent and it's creative. So glad that you stopped by and told me to read this. You do not disappoint, that's for sure. Hats off to you!

[Brandon]

f*****g awesome...i think that covered it...WOW!

[Spoken]

Life's a b***h and then you marry one

ok, that had me rollin' a lil bit.

I heard on the news Obama was freezing government wages for anyone who makes over 100,000 a year. Sorry, but you don't need that much money to live. If they gave half that to charities a year they'd be sitting comfortable while helping a lot of people. I know i could live off 50,000 a year no problem.. cause i'm making less than that now and, it may be barely, but i'm making it. Intellegent rhyme with a lot of truth. If people really cared about each other we'd all be able to adjust to help each other out so no one would suffer in a recession... but overall we're egocentric and uncompassionate.

[R J Askew]

Like a jet taking off! I'd like to see you perform this.

[Sel Whiteley]

I can really feel the anger coming through here, and your frustration with the world around you. You move seamlessly between the geopolitic and ghetto, and show how they both interelate, and that's another true talent. It shows how you are just trying to live in the face of all the injustice and yet also protesting against it. There should be more people with a social conscience like you have.

[Shadow]

Sometimes it only takes one voice speaking loud enough for everybody to hear and change their ways but the one's who should hear what you have written never will....that is a shame


Very nicely written and very moment of truthish

[Bella]

I see why this is your mother's favorite. It's one of my favorites too. I really love how you start off typing small, then the words get bigger and bigger. I especially love how the last part is in red. It emphasizes your frustration and anger. And the ending....wow!
"Breathe......
I just try to live, before it's time to leave
I just......wanna be happy
I just wanna.....Be"

The impact of this poem is huge. It's so very powerful. Great work.

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

lovely work my friend, just lovely!

[Jacqueline]

I really love this one.
And completely agree.

"We elect evil."

"I just wanna....Be"

Love it.
Reaches me pretty deep.

[Phantom Heart]

Love the ending, "I just wanna.....Be".
Very cool the way you escalated through the poem but finished on such a different note, almost relaxed.

[Mason Vail]

A powerful summary of the frustrations of many.

For the extra hour on my commute this morning thanks to the overnight snow, my carpool buddy and I did nothing but break down just how many jobs could be maintained or created at very good pay on the bonuses alone that CEOs of big banks got last year... Doesn't exactly put people in a good mood when hardworking coworkers, friends and family all around are losing jobs through no fault of their own, when others continue to rake in obscene money with no accountability as they absolutely fail in their responsibilities.

Not that I'm bitter.