Captivation

Your eyes wont shut.
They peer into my soul.
You don't even need to read my expression,
To effortlessly contribute,
A noble thought,
perfection.
That simultaneously
describes me in my
Entirety.

How do you captivate me?
With just one single blink.

Reviews

[Blue]

I love the emotion expressed, Brittney. This made me smile. Wonderful last two lines.

[Leigh]

A pure outpouring of thought in one seamless sentence that encapsulates a lot that's going on in that moment, beautifully done. And then the second sentence that summarises it, that's neat

[Pryde Foltz]

How do you captivate me?
With just one single blink.

Alas … some blokes are just like that, I suppose. Great write, Brittney.

[Brittney]

Seems most are; thank you pryde

[Wabbajack]

Short and relatively simple, yet there's so much depth to the meaning. I like it.

[Brittney]

Thank you!

[Baby Ricochet]

Love the ending. Good one. Applause

[Brittney]

Thank you!