I Am God

Sorry everyone! I haven't been on here in quite a while! Here's a new piece. Enjoy

I'd like to think of my self as a great poet.
A biblical prophecy.

But what am I really?
A young girl stricken with a distraught,
So Black and Nasty to bare.

It may seem, on the outside, I'm average.
But I know my third eye sees quite clear,
That beyond the mirror lies something
Much greater in its dark beauty.

You see I am a poet,
I am a biblical prophecy,
I make my own religion.
And I build my own fame.
Whether it be just in the convicts of my mind,
Or in a delirious reality.

I Am God.

Author's Note

Mental Illness, Religion, and Confidence

Reviews

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Shame the world don't look in the beauty of all, But I agree do in your heart , I don't believe in religing its something man made . But I know where your coming from. See within always:) I gather that in what your poem spoke.

[Brittney]

Sometimes the world is cruel, distorting our own image, but sometimes, if you close your eyes, to you you can be anything. Thank you for your review

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I know just what you said and mean,Thats rite:) Your welcome my new friend.

[Laminators Dubai]

this is so cool and so amazing...just wow^`

[wordwarrior]

An excellent poem of reflection and very honest too.

[Brittney]

Thank you!

[Rita L. Sev]

Three things that often go together... Introspection at its best here, Brittney.

[Brittney]

Thank you!!

[BL]

Although deluded this is very positive thinking

[Brittney]

My mind at its best and worst some would say

[Pryde Foltz]

No one ever said looking inward was easy and your poem illustrates the distress the deep thinker can feel. There is a whole lot to ponder in this powerful piece. A very eloquent and well-written piece.

[Brittney]

Thanks prude for this lovely review

[Baby Ricochet]

Sounds like a winning combination.

[Brittney]

It can be lethal when brought up in conversation

[isus]

you are

[Brittney]

Thank you!