What Is It

What Is It

A Poem by Brittney
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Meant to be interpretated in many ways. Each line is seperate yet connected. What Is. It? The underlying question.

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What is it to invent?
To seamlessly convey a message
Shall I break glass without a stone
Or preach without a blessing

What is to believe?
To mindlessly speak a lesson
Shall I answer without a cause
Or condemn without redemption

What is it to create?
To effortlessly predict a presage
Shall I paint without a subject
Or self diagnose without dissection

© 2013 Brittney


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The answers to your queries never seem to walk up and knock on one's door...they waft along in some incandescent breeze and tempt capture by those truly hungry. Your friend in words, Pete

Posted 11 Years Ago


Second poem im reading your a lady whom makes a stand in her life and says hey no1 going to beat me down because I wont let them. Just a lot of power behind the words.Great write:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I have found that self diagnosing..is like being Your own Lawyer....

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wasted time and effort of a shallow person, I guess that is what it is. I liked this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Dye

"What is to believe?
To mindlessly speak a lesson
Shall I answer without a cause
Or condemn without redemption"

I feel people do this with no thought now-a-days.

Very interesting questions.


Posted 11 Years Ago


Very well written. I really liked the tone and message. The last line is very introspective and inspiring. Great poem!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Brittney

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
What is to believe?
To mindlessly speak a lesson
Shall I answer without a cause
Or condemn without redemption

A great work, but the above stanza really stood out for me, especially the last line. I love the questioning and almost doubtful nature of your work

Well done :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Brittney

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :))
Each line has so much behind it, especially 'or preach without a blessing', this line has me lost in thought..an amazing poem, so powerful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Brittney

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for such a lovely review!
The last stanza is brilliant!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Brittney

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Or self diagnose without dissection

Good finishing line. I enjoyed reading this.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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