Isolated
A Poem by
Brittney
Stop
Do you see me?
I'm here
Alone
Isolated
Four walls
Intimidating
Closing in
Slowly
Wait
Are you listening?
The tick
Tock
Is frightening
Time
Is disintegrating
Only
Constantly
Pause
Can you feel it?
The ambiance
Is shifting
Chills
Overcome skin
I'm lonely
Waiting..
Waiting..
Stop.
Stop!
Stop!!!
Can you see me?
I think
I'm
Disappearing
© 2013 Brittney
Reviews
Very enthralling and well penned. I enjoyed this greatly.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thanks so much!
11 Years Ago
You're welcome!
I really like the ending...good piece...bob
Posted 11 Years Ago
I really like the ending...good piece...bob
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
You can hear the voice in this one... as the reader you feel the urge to just let her out of the isolation... but you portray this well within the lines of this verse...
Posted 11 Years Ago
You can hear the voice in this one... as the reader you feel the urge to just let her out of the isolation... but you portray this well within the lines of this verse...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Sometimes I feel I'm the one in isolation in my own mind, thanks for the review!
Really like the flow of this poem, definitely puts an interesting emotion out.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Really like the flow of this poem, definitely puts an interesting emotion out.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I honestly love it! Such a great job. Your truly talented :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
I honestly love it! Such a great job. Your truly talented :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Awesome! Thanks! :)
Fantastic piece. Powerful word choice. I read it a couple times.
Posted 11 Years Ago
Fantastic piece. Powerful word choice. I read it a couple times.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
it depicts a sense of falling into isolation nicely.
Posted 11 Years Ago
it depicts a sense of falling into isolation nicely.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you kindly
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