Isolated

Isolated

A Poem by Brittney

Stop
Do you see me?
I'm here
Alone
Isolated
Four walls
Intimidating
Closing in
Slowly

Wait
Are you listening?
The tick
Tock
Is frightening
Time
Is disintegrating
Only
Constantly

Pause
Can you feel it?
The ambiance
Is shifting
Chills
Overcome skin
I'm lonely
Waiting..
Waiting..

Stop.
Stop!
Stop!!!
Can you see me?

I think
I'm
Disappearing

© 2013 Brittney


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Very enthralling and well penned. I enjoyed this greatly.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittney

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much!
Lexi Richard

11 Years Ago

You're welcome!
I really like the ending...good piece...bob

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You can hear the voice in this one... as the reader you feel the urge to just let her out of the isolation... but you portray this well within the lines of this verse...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittney

11 Years Ago

Sometimes I feel I'm the one in isolation in my own mind, thanks for the review!
Really like the flow of this poem, definitely puts an interesting emotion out.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I honestly love it! Such a great job. Your truly talented :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittney

11 Years Ago

Awesome! Thanks! :)
Fantastic piece. Powerful word choice. I read it a couple times.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittney

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
it depicts a sense of falling into isolation nicely.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittney

11 Years Ago

Thank you kindly

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