Isolated

Stop
Do you see me?
I'm here
Alone
Isolated
Four walls
Intimidating
Closing in
Slowly

Wait
Are you listening?
The tick
Tock
Is frightening
Time
Is disintegrating
Only
Constantly

Pause
Can you feel it?
The ambiance
Is shifting
Chills
Overcome skin
I'm lonely
Waiting..
Waiting..

Stop.
Stop!
Stop!!!
Can you see me?

I think
I'm
Disappearing

Reviews

[Becca C.]

i'm in love with this piece of writing! amazing job!(:

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That's a deep write! It painted a picture in my mind happen a few years ago,I was an alcoholic. I just quit drinking at the time for three weeks due to I was sick,I figured id take advantage and stay clear of everyone kinda let myself work it all out,But it didn't happen that way,my so called inner circle of friends called on me to go out with them,I was like no im sick don't feel that great plus just don't want to get out cause I just stop drinking,OHHH but were your friends we never let anything happen to you! I went the first hour seem fine,and after that hour I felt those walls closing in and I lost it bad. There were many people there and very loud,but when all that happen the voices I heard came one by one! I just snapped bad had to have a drink.That so called inner circle didn't even know! That wasn't a fun feeling. Yeah I been there thank God I don't see or live that way anymore. Thanks for sharing Brittney:)

[Brittney]

This poem is based on my past addictions, so you pinned it on the mark, and sometimes in your lowest moments that's when you find out who your true friends are. Glad your doing well, keep up the good work

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Yes true on finding out who is who! I am hanging in there for the most part! You too love you art its painted very refine:)

[William J. Marsh]

Words that paint pictures are precious. Art is one thing to the creator and another to the audience. This paints a very vivid picture that can take a reader to a place and time. I picture someone lying in bed alone at night several stories up in an apartment building in a busy city with all of the commotion just outside the window.

[Lexi Villanueva]

You paint a prefect picture of the situation
In this piece very nightmarish.-100

[Brittney]

It is a nightmare to be trapped and isolated especially in your own mind, I'm glad to hear I could create that feeling within this. Thank you for your review!

[Lisa Victoria]

The sense of urgency in this piece had me on the edge of my seat... I love the way this piece flows, and your words paint a vivid picture of pain and loneliness... Nice piece:)

[Brittney]

Thank you, your reviews are so lovely.

[Inspiring Writer]

Whatever you knew, whatever is that about ISOLATE you just dig it.... you just dropped here your feelings into the words which seemed damn powerful and made some impact. Great job.

[Brittney]

I often feel isolated in my own mind, I came to this interpretation. Thank you for all the kind reviews!

[Inspiring Writer]

Yeh, i saw that's why this write seemed so real. Good job.
Your welcome !

[Gembro99]

You were able to create a nightmare. Beautiful job!

[Brittney]

Thank you!

[K. Louis]

I like the energy in your work...i've read two pieces now, and so far, I can already tell..that's definitely one of your strong suits

[Brittney]

I'm glad you enjoy it, I do indeed feel the energy of a piece when I'm creating it. I think I just let it overcome me and go from there

[Simon Welsh]

Nice structure. Love that last stanza.

[Brittney]

Thank ya thank ya :)

[Brittney]

Thank you everyone I appreciate your reviews and kind words greatly