Transition of seasons

Transition of seasons

A Poem by Brittney

Sigh with the wind as chill slowly creeps in
Summer has passed and left sadness in my skin
As the rush of the trees create tornados of leaves
A breeze seems to violently graze against my cheek

Chill almost as deep as the soon frozen lakes
The transition of season takes it toll, yes it takes
The earth seems bare but beneath it all, a still beauty is true

All I continue to remember is
Soon again the flowers shall bloom

© 2013 Brittney


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I liked the title and the way you represent the words in this write... you transfer the effects of the seasons... in the lines... and end the piece:

All I continue to remember is
Soon again the flowers shall bloom

Seasons come full circle...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Brittney

11 Years Ago

They do indeed, summer always continues to be my favorite
Brittany this is beautiful.. thanks for the rr.. shallimar

Posted 11 Years Ago


Brittney

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the review!
A very nice write, Brittany.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Brittney

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
i love soon again the flowers shall bloom 100

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittney

11 Years Ago

Thank you! Appreciate it :)
I think this is a great poem:)! Has a meaning everyone can relate too

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittney

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
Seasons change, as do feelings. I like.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brittney

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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