Transition of seasons

Sigh with the wind as chill slowly creeps in
Summer has passed and left sadness in my skin
As the rush of the trees create tornados of leaves
A breeze seems to violently graze against my cheek

Chill almost as deep as the soon frozen lakes
The transition of season takes it toll, yes it takes
The earth seems bare but beneath it all, a still beauty is true

All I continue to remember is
Soon again the flowers shall bloom

Reviews

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks for allowing me to partake of your perspective. I cannot wait for winter, living in Florida it is my favorite season.

[William J. Marsh]

I have read a million and one pieces about the changing seasons. This stands alone in it's own right. That is how I feel when winter is coming up.

[Fréyjä Helv..]

mysteriously pleasant. I got tingles on my skin...

[Inspiring Writer]

I loved first stanza you written with your scent of thoughts and that's truly penned. IInd one expressed the beauty if lakes, an ocean, water, rivers and related to all watery civilizations. And at last the ending was too kool as you did start your first stanza, i loved it too, you've expressed the beauty in your few words/poetic words. Nicely penned once again, great job.

[wordwarrior]

Beautifully penned with great imagery and gorgeous word choices.

[Brittney]

Thank you so much!

[Rosaria_V]

This gave me chilllss!! So good!! Love it :) I wish I could write this good!

[Brittney]

Thank you dear!

[Rosaria_V]

ur very welcome lovely, teach me how u write! Haha. :)

[Brittney]

Thank you all for your great reviews.

[eglantine]

Very lyrical... only suggestion: "A breeze [violently grazes my cheek]" Thank you for sharing!

[Brittney]

Thanks for your review"

[Rafia ~ Yellow Girl]

The transition of seasons was vibrant and refreshing though the wish for the blooming flowers made up my day by the end of this piece. :) Enjoyed alot!

[Brittney]

Awesome to hear thanks so much!

[JayJayBlue]

Great work, there's a morbid beauty to it, well done

[Brittney]

Thank you!