Questioning intimacy

Questioning intimacy

A Poem by Brittney

What's to come is fatal

A darkened sunrise after a flowers bloom

What's intimate is imagined

A right of passage into an empty room

© 2013 Brittney


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It's meaningful with great metaphors and amazing brevity. Nice work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


its dark but still its lively shows that overcoming is not up in head. its inside great.

you named it nicely^^

Posted 11 Years Ago


its dark but still its lively shows that overcoming is not up in head. its inside great.

you named it nicely^^

Posted 11 Years Ago


Powerful short lovely incredible done!-100

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love this as well! It may be short but sometimes you don't need a lot to make an impact and this to me makes a great impact :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Bleak but powerful stuff.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on August 13, 2013
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Brittney

Roxbury, NJ



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