brittany, yet again, this poem is just absolutely wonderful. Very relatable this is something nearly everybody has to go through and its nice for others to hear that they are not the onlu ones out there. exceptional feeling. I have a friend who is very close to me, practically a sister, who maybe, should read this on over a few times. exceptional, unique, and as for the literacy poryion of it, always your a very good writer, the only thing i noticed was the syllables, kind of made the beat a tad uneven, but who am i to judge. maybe you were going for that effect
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
I know :( The syllables were kinda jacked up but I honestly don't care for I was just trying to get .. read moreI know :( The syllables were kinda jacked up but I honestly don't care for I was just trying to get my message out
12 Years Ago
And that you did, do not be discouraged by that, a lot of times i will look at poems in my notebook .. read moreAnd that you did, do not be discouraged by that, a lot of times i will look at poems in my notebook or something and notice these tiny little details and i sort of got OCD about that stuff
Well, I'm Brittany. I'm going to be an eighth grader next school year. I'm not a HUGE writer but when one of my odd little ideas pops into my head I have to get it out. So now i'm copying from my j.. more..