When I laugh

I seem to laugh at everything...

When I laugh

It hurts my gut

But I don't care 

Cause I'm so happy

When I laugh

Sometimes I start crying

But don't worry 

It's a happy cry

When I laugh

Sometimes it's because I'm nervous

It's not a hearty laugh

Just a small little giggle

When I laugh

It might be for no reason at all

But the rest of my friends are

So why not?

So considering all that

And how I find humor in stupid stuff

I believe the last time I laughed

Was a couple minutes ago

Author's Note

Constructive criticism is wanted. Can't get better if you don't review

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

You don't rhyme. I came up on rap so I rhyme. Charming sentiment though. I love to laugh and I love to write funny poems.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Laughing always having more human value. Crying having heartfelt value. Smiling having many more values than the above two types. You are writing so beautifully about the laugh of human and smile of humanity. Humorous things are the path to touch the laughing music. Dear you knows the value of laugh and cry. Good job. With regards.

[Brittany]

Thank you :)

[Annabelle Lee]

the last time i laughed was about three seconds ago. What a charming write!

[Brittany]

Haha thanks :)

[Skye]

I actually like this poem, its unique and I like how you described each laugh.

Only one small hiccup, you wrote "It a happy cry" Maybe, "It's a happy cry" ?

[Brittany]

Yes, yes I'll fix that real quick. Thanks :) I means a lot