Loving me tomorrow

Sitting here

just listening to the song

and taking in all the words being said

and constantly asking myself the same thing

will you still love me tomorrow?

sitting here

interpreting the poem as i read on and on

not forgetting one word said

but constantly comtemplating

and my question remains the same

will you still love me tomorrow??

Sitting here

taking in every word

realizing that maybe i should

stop listening

and try to make this thing work

and instead of asking

despite my feelings

i know for a fact that

tomorrow doesnt matter

because who ever said it was promised to us

but the way you feel today

seems to be an everlasting feeling

because this unconditional love you give today

every second,minute,and hour of the day

that whether or not tomorrow comes

today was good enough for me

to realize that if tomorrow doesn't come

the love you proved today

is enough to hold me

if we dont see tomorrow

Reviews

[universalove]

this is nice . made due with now cause tomorow may not come.

[Emily Rose]

This was pretty interesting to read and I like its message - if you want to fix something, fix it! It's something that most people don't think about often enough, so it's makes for a great poem idea.

Some quick grammar suggestions: "on and one?" Hehe, I think you mean "on and on." (Don't sweat it - I make that mistake all the time!) Also, what does "ause" mean? It's not in the dictionary. I'm a bit of a stickler for correct grammar, so it would be nice if you could throw in some punctuation, or at least put apostrophes in your "doesn't"s.

Good job with this; it's creative.

[Reeses]

lo fricken l. get off of my song!!!! u know i luv ur writing but that's my shyt rite thurrrr. Amy & i came2an agreement on that song. don't do it B.ima have2rid u of consciousness.