DavidA Story by BrittanyThis short story was based on a reoccurring dream that my grandfather, whose name was in fact David, has had his entire life.By
the time he sauntered through the stuffy office to punch out David was more
than ready to be home. His ears were ringing from the constant noise of the
machinery and the beeping of the panel, he was bone-tired; having been here
since five this morning, he smelled terrible, AND he was starving again. “Catch
ya tomorrow fellas.” He rasped, as he gave a short, half-hearted wave to some of
the worn looking guys that had filed in behind him, and headed out the door. Finally OUTTA here. He had really only started
working here because his pops had worked here, the refinery wasn’t so bad
though; it was enough. And so he had stayed, and been here ever since. As he
exited the front gate and stepped out onto the street he couldn’t help but
notice the full roundness of the moon overhead; while he made his way to the
corner bust stop. It was a sketchy little stop with a swastika tagged on the
bench. F****n’ neo-Nazi b******s, David
thought to himself. They had started making their presence around here more
known than David cared for, and there was really nothing to be done about it.
They were like cockroaches, he told himself. Never bold enough to make a fuss
during the day are they, just sneaking around at night painting pictures in the
dark…like the cowards they were. But the moon was nice tonight at least, he
told himself, very nice. And then he waited. When
David walked up the steps of the grimy city bus it was nearly empty. The air
inside it held the residual smell of body odor, and had a distinctively stale
feeling. He cringed a little…this wasn’t routine for him. His car had broken
down yesterday, so here he was taking the bus instead. The occupants numbered a
mere three or four people; all of whom looked like they had seen better days.
Most of them wore the tattered dirty apparel that would indicate homelessness and
he guessed the bus was just a warm place to stay the night… Probably safer than
a bench anyhow. Outside the scratched and dingy windows was darkness. The moon,
which had been shining brightly, was now being overtaken by a thick cloud
cover. All was quiet. The air was still. Then a light in the back of the bus
flickered, and a haggard woman somewhere near the back coughed, breaking the
silence like glass. He walked down the well-trodden aisle to find a fairly
isolated seat, nodding silently to a man as he passed. David looked out of his
window, but all he could see was the vague outline of the full moon and a pale
blanket of mist. Earlier
that day had been perfectly ordinary as far as David was concerned. He'd gotten
up, made some toast and had a couple of cups of coffee. Always black coffee,
none of that sissy s**t. Black coffee would put hair on your chest, at least
that’s what his pops always said. Work went like it usually did too, besides
the overtime. David worked down at the Shell refinery. It was a nasty job, and
it called for long days, but it was good pay. It was a man’s job. But now, all
the ordinary had faded and an almost eerie feeling had settled over the night;
although he wouldn't have been able to explain why. David had never been an
overly superstitious person, nor had he ever been easily unnerved. Well, except
for that incident when they were kids…that damn statue. He wasn’t sure that he
really believed it was supernatural, not now that he was grown. Maybe it was just
group hysteria and childhood imagination. Who the hell knew? Other than that
David had always been an easy going, go-with-the-flow kind of guy. But for some
reason he couldn't shake the feeling that something just wasn't quite right. He
sat back in his cold, creaky seat convincing himself that he just wasn't used
to taking the late night bus... The
squealing voice of the brakes broke David’s train of thought as the bus slowly
rolled to a halt. Damn, this is my stop.
It occurred to him then that, at some point, the bus had begun giving him some
remote sense of security, not a feeling one usually gets from an 11 o'clock
bus, especially when it’s only other occupants looked like derelicts. On the
other hand, the thought of walking home tonight wasn't very appealing all of a
sudden, specifically walking home alone. That small amount of discomfort
surprised him, probably because in reality it bordered more on fear. As he stood
waiting to get off the bus he noticed the driver, a round and greying man, give
a nervous look about before opening the doors. ”You just take it easy tonight.”
He said with an almost nervous air. Apparently, the uneasy feeling David had
wasn't an isolated one. As soon as he stepped down onto the cracked cement the
doors snapped impatiently behind him. Goodnight
to you too, David thought. And he gave a second glance at the bus as it
rumbled on... The harsh yellow lights flickered again and this time they went
out. All of them. He looked down shaking his head, running his fingers through
his mess of coal black hair. Strange...
--- As
he walked on down the sidewalk everything seemed fairly normal, naturally, and
he was beginning to feel pretty damn ridiculous about his whole mood on the
bus. That is, until he turned the corner onto his quiet neighborhood street. It
was always quiet he supposed. But this was different, it was too quiet. The
atmosphere here on Halifax Way was one of total abandonment. There wasn't a car
in sight on the whole dammed street, except for one truck; some sort of work
truck he thought. It had one of those big racks on the back…for ladders. And
tool boxes in the bed. A little rusty but otherwise pretty sturdy looking. It
was parked halfway up on a lawn with the driver side door partially open. The
dome light was left on, creating a creepy glow in stark contrast with the
night...as if it had been left by someone in the midst of a panic, or just some drunk a*****e who doesn't know
when to call a cab. He told himself the latter was more likely. Wasn't it? David
zipped up his jacket as he continued on, the same black, cracked leather jacket
he'd been wearing since nineteen-eighty-something. He’d picked it up in high
school; it made him pretty cool back then. But its glory days were long gone
now…hell, so were his. At least that’s what he told himself most of the time.
He saw his breath on the air and he shivered. The temperature had dropped now.
It had already been chilly out tonight, but now it was just plain cold. He saw
that breath on the air, for the first time in his life, for what it actually
was. A piece of life...leaving his lips and dissipating, unmissed, into the
frigid emptiness of the dark night. It was a morbid thought and David wasn’t
entirely sure where it had come from. All he knew was that he felt very
vulnerable out here on the street, in a proverbial ghost town. Where'd everyone go? He kept walking on, there had to be a
perfectly reasonable explanation for it. Probably some sort of holiday this
weekend or something, things like that always seemed to slip his mind. His
brothers were scattered and he had no family of his own, what did he care about
s**t like that. Yeah, that was probably it. But
it didn't explain the crows. The telephone lines over David’s house were full
of them. Probably thirty or forty of the damn things. And they were all sitting
stark still and STARING. Were they staring AT him? Get a grip man, they're just birds, he thought. Some squirrel or
something probably got hit in the road and attracted them earlier. It would have been less unsettling, however,
had there been a murder of crows in front of any of the other houses. But there
weren't, just his. Give me a break. What is
this, some two bit, B-rated, horror flick? “Get out of here, shoo!"
But they just stared. Their beady black eyes bore into him, and for a moment
they held him there, transfixed. David was just standing there staring back at
this oddity when a sound, unnatural and yet strikingly familiar, sent a tidal
wave of shivers down his spine. It was startling and guttural. A howling horror
in the stillness around him. Anyone
who likes a good horror flick now and again may have had some inkling as to
what it sounded like. And David, who prided himself on being a warehouse of
knowledge on the macabre, the supernatural and the plainly horrific, knew
exactly what it sounded like to HIM. He’d spent countless nights watching
horrors, from the classics to the cheesy gore-fests of the modern cinema. Werewolves don't exist, they aren't real.
He could have kicked himself in the a*s for even entertaining the idea long
enough to tell himself NOT to entertain it, no matter how briefly. He knew it
was asinine, yet it terrified him all the same. All the hair on his body stood
right up on end as gooseflesh erupted all over his body. That sound had sent
him to an almost entirely instinctual place, where all he wanted to do was
run...but he wasn't sure if he could. What
if it saw him and gave chase? What if WHAT sees him? If WHAT gives chase? Pull yourself together brother, it’s just
a damn dog or something. The logical parts of his brain were fighting for
control of the situation. It was only a few yards to the front door of his house.
The same house they had grown up in, the house where “the incident” had
occurred, Christ’s sake David, don’t
think of that crap right now. And then he'd have to get the screen door
open and the door unlocked. The simple act of inserting a key into a lock and
turning it had never seemed more difficult nor time consuming. But, trying
would be better than being pounced on from behind without giving it so much as
a fighting chance. A fighting chance,
that's a real knee-slapper David. But, the only conclusion David could come
to was that he shouldn't have gotten off the bus. It
was too late for that now, he HAD gotten off the bus; so now was a good time to
be in the house. He cautiously and shakily raised his foot, and then slowly set
it back down to earth. How desperately he wanted to move his all too suddenly
lame legs. But he just couldn't. Maybe if he just stood still whatever it was
wouldn’t even notice him. It was a
child’s hope. What won’t notice you? For
Christs sake David move your damn feet, there is nothing out here... He
told himself he was being ridiculous, and still this base level fear was
overpowering his common sense. He took a step. One slow...fearful step. Just
one. Because at that moment he heard it yet again, and much closer this time.
That wicked howling. Shivers flooded every inch of his flesh. It
had been cold that night, no doubt, but it was different now. It was that
sound. It was that horrible, wretched noise. One that made him feel utterly
helpless and alone. And he WAS alone, wasn’t he? Isolated completely on a once
lively street that had turned desolate. A sound that could freeze warm blood
right in its veins, and still a restless soul. "For the love of life
itself David, get in the God damned house!" He scolded himself; the sound
of his own voice making him jump. And then again, closer still...maybe even
across the street. "My God..." he whispered out loud. “It’s getting
closer." David ran. No more debating, just running. Whatever it was that
was out here, he was no match for. Of that, David was certain. --- The
putrid smell of death and decay is an overpowering one, to say the least. It
came from torn and rotting flesh lodged between disgusting, crooked, pointed
teeth. Dark teeth, stained teeth. Teeth stained with...well, he didn't think he
wanted to know. It could have been the dog from down the road, the perfect
family pet. The one that sits in your lap after supper, and wards off strangers
who come too close to the children playing in the yard. The one that had been
let out to take a whiz and then BAM...goner. He could just imagine it, throat
torn out with blood and s**t everywhere. Don’t
think that. Or what if...what if it was that kid a few houses down. What if
he kicked that new soccer ball he got a little too hard while he was playing
outside after dinner, and what if he had to wander a little too far to get
it... It could be a little old lady who was running late with her errands and
had to walk home from the bus a little later, and darker than she was used
too...just like him. Every synapse in his brain was firing and he was being
flooded with not just horrific visions of his hunted neighbors, but of his own
life, and eventual slaughter. It’s incredible how many thoughts, how many
memories, we can go through in such a minute amount of time. Not
only was the smell repulsive, the breath that carried it was hot. Not warm,
hot...and thick, and sticky. The sudden wave of putridity came from his left
side, accompanied by a giant black mass. It was like nothing David had ever
encountered before, it gagged him instantly and made him vomit. This was no
dog. No sir. Gods be damned…He should have run. Why didn’t he just run…? David
didn't have much time to worry about bad breath though, because the sudden
agony was more than he could bear. It encapsulated his every thought. Massive
vice like jaws engulfed his shoulder. There was a sickening cacophony of bones
crunching and flesh ripping as teeth tore into him. Then the claws came. The
hellish beast tore into his torso and abdomen…clawing with abandon. Blood and
bile poured over the dirty concrete walkway as he continued to retch. He could
see it if he looked down at his feet. It looked almost black in the mild glow
of the streetlight. A warm, red river of life, HIS life….spilling over into the
dead grass. Should have run... It was David’s final thought. Left shoulder
devoured, his arm lying at his feet, insides spilling out. The loud caw of a
crow. There was pain, and blood...then nothing. © 2018 BrittanyReviews
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