Manic Moods

 

I’m screaming inside

A thousand razor blades of emotion

Slicing through the thickness of my being

And I’m screaming inside

 

I’m running in circles

An endless race to nowhere that I cannot win

Sitting still is too painful, I can’t abide

So I’m running in circles

 

My skin is crawling

Craving the touch of a special being, one who understands

I don’t know who you are

But my skin is crawling

 

My mind is racing

Every possibility of every world bombards me

Thoughts flow like a million grains of sand filling an hourglass

And my mind is racing

 

I have to fly

 I cannot be still, stagnant

My mind is wild

And I’m screaming inside

Reviews

[Leo]

Descriptive passionate and genuine! Loved every word..I hope this poem that you've written with obvious intention to perhaps learn to fly once again and end the manic mood or phase etc had freed your mind at last..anyway I have a feeling if you read "The Valley" it will put a smile on your face no doubbbbbbbbt! :) and leave me a review why nottttt :)

[Brittany]

I will give it a read!! 🙂🙂🙂

[C. Lee Battaglia]

"My mind is racing
Every possibility of every world bombards me
Thoughts flow like a million grains of sand filling an hourglass
And my mind is racing"

Favorite sentence, "Thoughts flow like a million grains of sand filling an hourglass" It was so descriptive and It really captured the flow of your poem! This is very unique and a very enjoyable read!
Thank you for sharing your outstanding work!
Keep up the great work!

Your friend,

C. Lee Battaglia

[Brittany]

You know, that is actually one of my favorite lines as well!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

It was very good! :)