My Loving Wolf

A poem for my boyfriend on valentine's day, I hope you all love it! Our anniversity is March 6th

Everyone is a rose

and every rose has thorns

that show your true colors in time,

they're beautiful, but harmful.

 

You, my love...

has no rose that can be you

your more irresistible....

you have a beast inside you,

a beast that cannot be tamed.

 

I wish to releash your beast

to see how wild you can be,

how dangerous it will become

to unchain you,

to experience your

fierce passion.

 

I desire to touch,

to taste,

how unbroken you are

my loving wolf.

Author's Note

I hope you love it as much as my love and I loved it ^-^

Reviews

[Enigma]

Wow. Amazing! :D

[YYPSNicoletse]

Fantastic!

[♡Moon Child♡..]

I have to review this again cuz I didn't say much the first time. This poem seemed like a simple love poem when I read it, but not it seems to be filled with meaning. It made me think, it made me remember and feel like I haven't in a long long time. This was beautiful Britanny. I want you to keep writing forever and ever and ever! Love you dear :)

[Kon™]

Amazing and interesting poem ^__^
Very nice metaphors included, and good description :)
Keep it up!

[Shalini Dinesh]

a loving wolf? nice metaphor... lovely poem, let your touch tame the wolf!!

[♡Moon Child♡..]

Thats wonderful, sweetheart ^^ I love it