This poem is about taking a risk and being yourself. People fall into the trap of being pressured into things everyday. People need to be themselves not somebody someone else wants them to be.
This is a very inspiring piece. You write clearly, which lets the reader see just exactly the message you intend to give out, which is usually that of an inspiring one. You do great work, and I sincerely hope you can continue to write, as you shine out bright amongst the other poems some put up, typically of an unhappier subject. Great job!
It's a cliche, as you note in one of your stanzas, but it's alright. It's something that'd perhaps best be inspiring to someone in need of inspiration, someone feeling daring and needing the extra push, or someone going through a catastrophe of sorts and needing a beacon to restore themselves to normal. I can't go beyond that, as I'm a literature major and focus on older forms of poetry; but as a piece, this is alright as is. Slip it on someone's desk if they're having a bad day, especially if they're a stranger. Under that circumstance, this might have the greatest power.
This is a very inspiring piece. You write clearly, which lets the reader see just exactly the message you intend to give out, which is usually that of an inspiring one. You do great work, and I sincerely hope you can continue to write, as you shine out bright amongst the other poems some put up, typically of an unhappier subject. Great job!